Dead Lines

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mynameisTyler
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Mon May 18, 2009 6:10 am
mynameisTyler says... · Mon May 18, 2009 6:10 am
self sought silence, suffered scattered
tender tried travel, tired trails tremble
ran red river road, ruined Regalia
delved deeper, done damage, die did.
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KnightlyAngel09
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Tue May 19, 2009 12:29 pm
KnightlyAngel09 says... · Tue May 19, 2009 12:29 pm
Hi.

This is really short. Forgive me if I misunderstand this. This is about life isn't it? Fantastic wordplay by the way. It reminds me of the way Shakespeare misplaced all the figures of speech to fit his works. Anyway, this is lovely.

Oh and welcome on here.:)
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mynameisTyler
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Fri May 22, 2009 4:12 am
mynameisTyler says... · Fri May 22, 2009 4:12 am
@KnightlyAngel09: Hey! I know it's a bit difficult so thanks for taking some time for this poem. Yes it is about life in general, although another way of looking at the poem has a very specific story. I hope you enjoyed the little trick I put at the end there (hehe). Thanks for the review and the welcome! :D
and that night the sky was blue

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