The Beauty

Glistening sea, so full of life

looking onto the horizon of beauty

feeling the cool mist hit my face

inhaeling the salt water taste

seeing the depths of the water

and the change of color

looking into the coral reefs

staring into the eyes of the fish

swimming without a care

not ever once blinking

afarid to miss the beauty

of within

Hey,

I'm returning the favour of a review and I'm gunna ad you as a friend because you can never have too many friends! Your poem is lovely and I think I get what you're trying to say. I think you're trying to say is that your scared on missing out of the beauty around you. Very well written, it felt natural and fluid. My favourite line was 'inhaeling the salt water taste' I thought that was very cleverly done, describing the sea spray as waste! Nice one

Any time you want help or by the look of this poem I might be asking you for help!

Peace

Brown Eyed Girl xxx