All about you

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To meet you was all but chance
and to think that
I used to dread,
That one last approaching dance

I have never met someone
as amazing as you
no one has ever made me feel
as beautiful as you do

Every time we talk I get nothing but surprise
to tell me you love me
and I can see
it in your eyes.

You’re my baby, my love,
My one special kiss,
The one that will always
Make my heart skip


I hope you love me
as much as you say you do,
and I hope you believe me
when I tell you I love you



This ring on my finger,
My devotion to you,
Saying to god, in front of family and friends
Those two words the ones saying “I Do” A
I am a depressed person, most of my poems/writings have to deal with blood, death, and stuff like that. If you dont like it then dont read it, simple as that




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this is my favorite stanza in this poem. i like how you used a lot of different words for love and togetherness instead of saying them over and over. on your signature you said that most of your writing is about blood, death, destruction etc. you did really good on something that is about the completely opposite opposite thing




I hope you love me

as much as you say you do,

and I hope you believe me

when I tell you I love you
"The die has been cast. My destiny set. Now i have one question. Can I trust you?" ~??




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Hey again!

Emotionally stunning! You're really deep, you should be writing romance novels! You should read that at their wedding I'm sure they'd love it.

Amazing done

Brown Eyed Girl xx



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