Royal Engagment

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Aim only going to give you a rundown of this story before I start it
The setting is set in a imaginary land so places and names may sound weird, anyhow a young princess who is anything but girly is forced into a marriage with the king(whom her father and her have been fighting for years) suggest as a form of peace his sons Tristan and Raoul could marry the good kings daughter and cousin. While Tristan is sweet and noble his brother is the opposite and in the process the princess Kyla wages war on Raoul for murdering her cousin, this story is a power struggle for a love that may never exist between Tristan and Kyla and Tristan's love for his family. Even though Tristan loves Kyla she does not love him but will that all change and what will become of the families feuds.
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Sounds Interesting.

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Thanks for the reply and ill try to continue as soon as possible
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oh yeah by the way i like your computer name...are there any stories youve wrote on here.

please don't double post, just edit your previous post
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It's a pretty cool idea, but obviously derived from a lot of other things, so I'd work really hard to make it unique. :D
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I'd definitely have to second that.

It has potential, but if you're not careful you will most definitely fall into the deadly black hole of trite cliche. *shudder* But I'd like to see it when you get it up. Good luck.
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