The fairytale

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A voice carries with the wind,
A soul dances in the rain,
A girl hurts on the outside
To rid the inside pain.

Three short words spoken
By two fragile lovers,
Becomes a tragic tale,
With more promises broken.

A tear falls and crashes,
A whisper is heard, secrets released aloud,
We’re all in an empty room,
Trying to lose ourselves within a crowd.

As a girl writes her devastating verses,
Her heart becomes shattered.
Her tears fall on the fairytale,
A story about how love once mattered.




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Aww that is absolutely Beautiful great detail imagery metaphor everything it's amazing and plus i actually understand it ..................................................................... very good job write more so that ohter ppl can enjoy 2 yay im first 2 coment ur really good u have a lot of talent very very very very very very very very very good poem love it at first i thought it was gonna boring but it turned out great good job



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