I Will Crit Your Work!!!!

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Ok, I know that I don't really crit that many people's work. This is basically because I have a fairly limited amount of time on the internet, and because the whole "Find someones work and crit on it" thing isn't terribly specific, it's easy to get side tracked.

Therefore, I am throwing my arms open and volunteering myself. So please, if you have some work that no one has commented on yet, or you want more opinion PM me!!

Seriously! If you want my opinion and advice just Private Message me, and next time I'm on I will comment.

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Yeah! I said I WILL CRIT YOUR WORK!!!!

Just checking you QUITE GOT THAT!!!!!

That is to say: PM ME AND I WILL REVIEW YOUR WORK!!

PLEEEAAAASEE!!!! I need something to do that will raise my post count!!! I want to read other people's work!!! I want to be a darn GENERAL CRITIC when I'm older?? How am I to do that if no one will ask me to CRIT THEIR WORK??


*cough*

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I did PM a crit request, but I never got the crit....
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PM'd yah ;).
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OKAY. I'LL LET YOUR REVIEW MY WORK. CONSIDER YOURSELF LUCKY.

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Care to crit mine? Do you do art? I havn't PMed you, but can I just ask here?
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sabradan wrote:I did PM a crit request, but I never got the crit....


Yeah, should probably warn you, it takes a while - I'm only allowed online at fairly sparadic intervals. I printed out yours in particular, since it's pretty long, and indeed I'm hoping to crit it tonight.
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jennafina wrote:Care to crit mine? Do you do art? I havn't PMed you, but can I just ask here?


Yes, I do crit art. And I will.
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Thanks! I saw that you looked at all three!

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There. Thats three big smiles for you.

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This is my latest work, and it could use some crits. Thanks.

Don't forget Under the Desert Sky, though!!! Please and thank you.
"He who takes a life...it is as if he has destroyed an entire world....but he who saves one life, it is as if he has saved the world entire" Talmud Sanhedrin 4:5

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