Dragon Bird

This is a Dragon/Bird thing I drew.

I started a rough draft of it in class, when I was bored and doodling all over my paper. Never thought it would lead to this. And, yes, I am planning on coloring this in the somewhat near future (hopefully)

Description: He is a creature of legends and has only been seen by the rare few. Being extremely territorial and aggressive, no one dares to study or capture it. It lives inside volcano Killmen, and lies in wait for anyone to invade its home. Its wings are torn from fights with its own kind, of which it had eliminated all. Now, its the only specimen left, breathing in the heat of the Earth's core.

This is definitely out of the ordinary=]

I like the head, and the beak!

The claws are unique, good job.

The thing that bugs me is that the wings look like there is a metal pole holding them up, maybe if there was more texture and lines in the wings themselves it wouldn’t look so weird.

Other than that I liked it, good job.
I've seen a few of your other stuff, you're pretty good=]

Telina

These is pretty good but I think you need to add colour or then the pictuer looks pretty boring. You also need to add more information on the wings. They look like metal poles with cloths hanging down from them.

I would not so much like to see this in colour, but shaded. It doesn't have any depth right now, and it would be great if you could shade it to give it both dimension and texture. Also, the way you have it now, I was looking at it a completely different way. I'm thinking: "Umm...what are those jaggedy things sticking up from the bottom?" and then I saw it and went: "Oooohhhhhh! Cool! A dragon!"

For some reason, the claws make me think of tree roots, but I really like them. I do think that the "fingers" on its right hand are too wide, an the ones on the left are too clean cut, if you know what I mean. Try to make them a little more jagged on the edges.

Other than that, great drawing. It's very clean and I love the overal look of its head and other detailed parts.

-Sea-

phoenix

Cool! The face looks like it has a mask over it. I agree with lordgluzman color would really do wonders for this picture.
The wings are... a little awkward. It looks like ripped pieces of cloth hanging down. Maybe if you make a pattern of that ripped design it will look better, what I mean is outline it a centimeter outward. Or something like that. It would make a cool pair of wings!
PM me if you do more!
~Storm

This is a good start, but if I were you, I would start working on detail. Here are some suggestions:
- Maybe add scales or feathers, fur, anything you want to make the skin more interesting.
- Try to colour it! You can choose awesome-possum (sorry I like that phrase) colours, and make it super cool.
- U could also shade it! To make it look all 3D and stuff. ^_^
- A background might be nice... Well, I never really put backgrounds in mine, but I think yours would look really good with one! Especially coloured.

I never used to colour my pictures, but then one day I decided to make a very rough sketch, then colour it, and it turned out as one of the best pics i ever made, despite it starting out as a very rough sketch! Sorry I just had to say that.

Anyways, I like the uniqueness of it! Keep up the good work. The markings are really neat, too!