Birdie Creature

I was doodling in Spanish and I came up with this

Description: A seemingly innocent fuzzy bird, it can become a killer at the slightest frustration, anger, or fear. Its about the size of a full-grown cat, with a head-full of hair and cat paw rear feet. Its wings are half feathers half finger-like. Its arrow shaped tail can stab through flesh without a sweat.

Otherwise, a vegetarian.

My computer won't let me see the image. I don't know if it's just me or if its the picture. I'm sure it looks good, but I can't see it..
Thought I'd let you know about that..
MV

Same here, MidnightVampire, so it's not just you. My computer won't let me see your picture either. I'm sure it's brilliant too, most photos here are. Also, should the title be dragon/bird not dargon/bird. Hehehe....

I hope you can fix this and post your picture.

-Colt

Same thing here, I'm curious about your avatar now thought, it looks pretty cool. Please tell me you didn't make it and that I'm not the only person who can't draw and make cool things on the computer.

Umm.. So this is what you come up with in Spanish?

First of all, I think this would be really awesome in colour!

There's a little line at the base of his tail that makes it look disconnected a bit. Erase that as best you can, please.

The foot furthest from us looks a bit blocky. Maybe add a toe as you did in the other foot.

His...umm Hair?...looks disconnected at the top. I would give him some jaggedy stuff over his face, a little behind his eye if you know what I mean.

Other than that, it was cute. I am curious as to why it was in the "contest entries" section of your portfolio. In what contest did you enter it?

-Sea-

Aww...this little dude is cute -_-

I could see him as a Pokemon, you need to name him...or her.

It should be in color, that helps. His hair looks disconnected at the top and at his back area. His tail is kind of messed up, I'd fix that. The feet are squarish and blocky. The eye has a dark part in the center; if it's supposed to a pupil, it's off-centered. Otherwise, it cute and I love it. Send me the finished piece, if you ever color it, that is. I like it. You earn a star! Bravo!

-Colt

Awww. He is super cute, the outer shading then the thiner line is really good effects. If you sharpie and color him/her it would be cool. I'm kinda imaging a purple gold color right now. =)
I love the pointed tail. I agree with Colt, he/she does look like a pokemon! The eye is awesome. I always have trouble shading in my eyes but you did a nice job! Hey looks like a penguin/parrot/pokemon/cutie~
Great job!
~Storm

Haha! Aww! It is so cute! Because you draw fantasy things like this, I think you should make your own card-things! Kinda like pokeymon or whatever it is, but your own! It would be soo cool!
Review: I like it!
But I think you should colour it and fix its feet. Maybe you should also add a mouth, if you want... Thats all! Good Job!

It looks kind of like picachu wearing an Elvis wig.

I am very worried about your Spanish grade.

The hair just kind of looks like somebody stuck it on the creature's head. It doesn't match the body.

The...wings? Where are they? Haha... The feet don't really make sense to me...is the far back one bigger than the front one? That's kinda what it looks like And I agree with a few others; the hair doesn't look attached. It looks like a hat, or something lol. It looks good, it just doesn't look attached.

Very good job on the beak! It looks very much like a real bird, like a parrot or something haha. His eye is so funny x3

Good job! It's very cute n_n

haha that's real cute! I want to call it Squiggles or Muffin. It's so round and looks like it needs a warm and fuzzy hug. XD
Ur talented. Keep drawing! :]

~Skyy.