Rawr! I Eat Buildings! (cartoon godzilla thing)

Well this a picture i was doodling. Sorry, I was trying to scan it but my scanner wouldn't work so I just took a picture of it and posted it. I colored and sharpied it so I hope its better. THe lighting is kinda bad sorry. I took the picture with my phone soo... Yeah anyways enjoy!
~Storm

*Downloads the file*

I'm waiting for this to open, la la la...

And it opened...

Hi there! Shauni here!!

OHH, gigantic image:shock:. That's why it took so many time to open...

Okay, now the review:

I liked, I think it's funny .
The idea is different but the doodling could be better (don't worry, I can't do that better, so...)
The Godzilla has a cute face, he looks like is smiling. It should look terrible and mean but he looks nice! He makes me remember the "tamagotchis", don't know why...

The building that is falling, looks like it was cracked like a cookie, broke in to half. It should be falling apart, doesn't it?

*I liked your stickman (the people), they are funny!

Overall: It's cute but it needs some work!

Shauni

Oh hai!
For me there was no problem opening it (but I have an awesome possum Mac, so... )
Anyway... The Godzilla is really cute, It is like evil on the inside and cute on the outside. Poor stick people I would hete to have my town ruined. Anyway... I think that next time you should maybe go around it in sharpie, erase the pencil lines, and then colour it. It will look cooler that way if ya no whut I meen . . . . . . . . . Anyways . . . . . . . . .
Good job I like it. I love all the buildings (especially te one with the satelite dish on top! ) and um . . . yeah. Nice Work!!

Wow. I really love this! The Dino actually looks friendly on it's face! It looks almost like it could be somebody's giant, cute pet! Also, the whole thing has one theme about it, and it is a very cute theme! (sorry I say cute a lot but that is the only word that describes it)! I could never draw like that! *Jealousy blushes, then realizes I'm not an artist, I am a writer and then smiles and says*; Great job! Do some more!

Hey! Thanks every one! It's so nice of you all to comment on this.
~Shauni - Sorry about the size. I did it on a 8 by 11 inch printer paper and I don't know how to resize it so... Yeah, the building is kinda messed up but maybe he split it in half then picked it up?
~ Katemabob - Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it. I would sharpy it and all but I lost the original drawing. *smacks head, saying silly me.*
~ Peanut- Hi! THanks for review it. I'm glad you liked it. Yeah I like the cute dino too. I thinks its a baby!
Ha! I'm not much of an artist either. Just a couple of doodles here and there. Actually my signature mark is a flower. I draw them every where. On school papers, every where! Maybe I'll post some sometime. People know me by it. Ha. Just kidding. Only my friends.
Thanks again,
~Storm

PS: trying to work out how to resize!

Hehehe, is it wrong that I want to cuddle your Godzila? She/he is SO cute, lol. I like the eyes. I'd say that it's a cute doodle, but that's all it is, a doodle. I'd suggest working on scales for the feroucious Godzilla, and his flame looks like a leaf, XD It would help if instead on veins in thje fire, you drew another flame inside the flame. Like the outside would be orange and the inside would be yellow. Color might help, it would certanly add texture, and you could make it look cartooney, if that is what you are going for. I like it! Keep up the good work1

Yay you coloured it! And it looks really good! Love the colours! It makes so much of a difference, doesn't it? Awesome job. hope to see Morrreeee!!

I agree, the flame definitely looks like a leaf... but that is the cutest part! What other dino blows leaf- fire? None! Keep the leaf... it completes the image!