Love Me Until my Heart Stops

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Chapter 1


“What song would describe your life?” He asked me looking directly at me with his hazel green eyes. God, I would do anything when he looked at me like that. His eyes were just so enchanting. So pure and beautiful.

“I don’t know, I never really gave it a lot of consideration. But it would probably be a cd not a song.” I said quietly laying in the grass looking up at the stars.

“I guess you have a point there. God, do you have idea how amazing you truly are. Like, even if we were just friends I would always want to be around you. Your laugh is enchanting, your smile is pure bliss and your soul is more beautiful than Paris in lights. And the best thing about you is that you have no idea how truly magnificent you are. You’re so beautiful.” He said now hovering over me looking at me directly in my eyes. I felt like he could see my soul when he looked at me like that, and as he kept staring at me I just couldn’t bring myself to look away. I felt my heartbeat speed up.

You’re such a sappy romantic.” I said smiling.

“You know I can stay like this for eternity, just hovering over you like an angel. Protecting you from any type of hurt. I wouldn’t need to kiss you, hug you, and or even have sex with you, no touching whatsoever. As long as I’m near you I could live off that.” He said as his lips were brushing against mine. And at the same exact moment I closed my eyes and held my breath. Just being in his presence left me absolutely breathless, always struggling for my next breath.

“I love you, I’ve never felt this way about anyone in my life. And I know that that sounds oddly cliché but it’s the truth. I always thought that love wasn’t meant for me, it was just two people that tolerated each other enough to form a relationship. But I don’t have to tolerate you .I love everything you say and do. I think you’re the most amazing person that I’ve ever met. I don’t let people in like I did you. Truth be told I was scared. Scared to be hurt by you. That you would take my heart and run with it. I was utterly terrified to be with you let alone near you. But for this strange unexplainable reason I let you in and I let you love me.” I whispered to him as he prompt himself on his elbow listening to me.

“I just can’t picture myself with anyone else but you and that still kind of scares me because what if you leave or something happens that makes us unable to be with each other?” I said with tears burning in my eyes.

“I would never stop loving you, even if you stopped loving me. And the only thing that could tear us apart is death”.

And then suddenly he kissed me with as much passion as he had. I felt my heart started to race and the world around me turned black.

Death.
Is.
A.
Bitch.

I took a glance around the white solarium only to be focused on the only figures that I had come to know and love; my best friends Gregory and Shanna. Gregory standing there hovering over Shanna like a child but only due to the fact of his height. He looked agitated and I could tell because when he was agitated he always had to run his hands through his curly black hair. His wide green eyes finally settling on the dead oak tree that stood slouching outside the window, then and only then did I notice how truly magnificent he was.

Shanna. The only other word that would describe her is: Breathtaking. She had been my best friend ever since I had to start some type of active therapy. The first time I had laid eyes on her I thought she was the most beautiful person I had ever met. Her wavy red hair cloaking her freckled pale face, along side her glowing bright gray eyes. Immediately I knew that this girl would ultimately change my life with her beautiful soul.

I finally found my voice after carefully analyzing them down to the very tee. I knew that my reflection in their eyes was something horrid and unimaginable. So I made my way over to them with my signature frown on my face and cigarette in hand. Not only was I depressed and crazy but I had started the habit that I swore that I would never do. But in these last couple of months I had discovered this whole new version of myself. Someone that I always knew was there but never gave her the time of day. But now, I had no choice, since the accident I had no hope whatsoever in regaining the girl I once was. I went from a girl who loved everything and everyone with her whole fiber of being, someone who got lost in the party scene, the girl that once held a certain innocence that she had always maintained. After I had watched the only person that could love me with as much blindness passion as I did him, die, that innocence died. For quite some time now he had remained in an urn at home resting on my bedside. I became this new person: a woman that depended on no one, declared mentally ill, thought-provoked, honest woman. I had finally found this person in my soul that was drowning in this cascade of happiness and now had emerged. Broken. Warn-down. Fragile. Yet strong. A beautiful contradiction.


We all exchanged looks and mentally agreed that hugs nor any sort of emotional release would be needed. I was relieved, the last thing I needed were my best friends feeling sorry for me when everyone around me kept telling me how sorry they were and how strong I was. I was now at the point where I responded with an “I don’t give” attitude. (As quoted by my therapist).

“So…Mandy dumped me, right after I found out that she cheated on me.” Gregory said bluntly breaking the silence.

I thank God for that man’s bluntness, that’s the reason that we can get a along so well. We say what we feel and expect the same of others. Of course we’re always disappointed by the human race when they play those mind games. But Gregory and I, we knew how to play people’s games better and always got what each person on this horrible planet deserves. The truth, no matter how harsh or ugly, or beautiful.

“Really? Well she was a whore anyway. You could have done better.” I replied messing with my medical bracelet. The latest in hospital wear and now the only thing I could have around my wrist.

“I don’t know. I mean you were in Australia for like 3 months. Maybe it was because she was lonely and missed you. Give her the benefit of the doubt, or at least consider it.” Shanna said, staring at her cell phone probably texting her new boyfriend of the week.

Gregory and I exchanged looks without even saying anything we both knew what we each other was thinking.
I had introduced Shanna to Gregory out of pure politeness and he instantly felt this love hate relationship with her. Loving her beauty and how simply breath-taking it was and then hating her innocence that came with it as well. Shanna was what the world called a complete optimist, pissing rainbows and sunshine. Making any situation no matter how grim, into something that Mother Theresa would say. And that utterly burned Gregory up inside.

“That still doesn’t give her the right to cheat on him. If you think it does; then I can understand why you never stay in a relationship for more than 2 months.” I shot back at Shanna.

I know that that sounded harsh but it was the truth. Shanna had never had a long-term relationship in her life. It’s sad because she’ll never know what it feels like for someone to selflessly love her and do anything for her; like I had. I just hope that she meets that person that makes her knees weak when they speak and her heat flutter when they kiss.

“I was just saying, maybe she was lonely and he was there and she couldn’t…you know what never mind.” She was agitated and pissed that I had just basically said what everyone that knew her couldn’t say, but knew. Shanna’s friends are the people who hated confrontation and hated hurting someone’s feelings, so no real feelings were ever exchanged; only which guys were cute, where they got their hair dyed, and how fat they were.

“I’m leaving in about 2 weeks guys, isn’t that totally awesome.” I said attempting to break the icy tension between all of us.

“That’s great. Things haven’t been the same since you’ve been in here, Shanna and I have been at each other’s necks constantly, and everyone keeps dropping off “I’m sorry” casseroles.” Gregory said in a low voice accompanied by a chuckle.

“I’m sorry casseroles? Really?” I started to laugh instantly. Gregory and I hated casseroles along with pity and empathy. And when they were put together it was a simple reminder how the human race dealt with grief; with a tuna baked meal, an apology, and probably some major helpings of pity.




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Okay, here's my review as promised:

Nit-picks-

“I don’t know, I never really gave it a lot of consideration. But it would probably be a cd not a song.”

CD should be capitalized. You should also add but to the sentence before it.

You’re such a sappy romantic.” I said smiling.

Missing quotation marks.

I felt my heart started to race and the world around me turned black.

Death.

Is.

A.

Bitch.

I would love to know what happened to her to make her so bitter. I can't wait for the next chapter! :D But I do think it might be helpful if you explain a bit about what exactly happened. Just slightly touching on the subject would be goo, as well.

The latest in hospital wear and now the only thing I could have around my wrist.

What else did she have around her wrist?

Overview:
I really enjoyed reading this and I love your description in the beginning about what their relationship was. I love your boy character, its what every girl wants but can't really have: the ideal and picture-perfect boyfriend. I'm not sure if that was taken away from her, but it sounds like it. I have absolutely no idea why she's in the hospital, but I guess I'll just have to wait till the next chapter. It's good to leave your reader thinking.

Your main character (whom I don't know the name of) has a very unique personality. I liked how you explained that she used to be different, but now is resentful towards life. I also enjoyed finding the contrast between her and her friends, like Shannon. Plus, I don't really understand why she doesn't love Greggory if they are so alike. It seems to be a simple solution to her problems.

Anyway, I'll be waiting for chapter 2!
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“Yes we have like 20 of them at home. The house smells like casseroles and if you haven’t noticed, so do we.” Shanna said with a smirk on her face.

We all laughed in unison which was something that I hadn’t experienced in quite a while and I missed it. I knew that my being instituted had changed all our lives for the worst and that the past year had been hell on them alone. I knew that in these last couple of months I had changed their lives dramatically, and not in the kind of way that inspires you and convinces you that your life is better this way. It was the kind of way that made you realize that you are a burden and your friends being there with you through the pain actually makes you believe that you’re lovable again.

Finally after a few more moments exchanged between the three of us, visiting hours were over. That only meant one thing, I had to go back to this hell-hole and face my problems. I was escorted back to my room to find my roommate; Cassidy, hastily typing on her laptop.
“Hey Smurf” she replied in her usual monotone voice.
“Hey Cass, how was your day?” I had asked shuffling over to my bed.

When I had first been assigned a roommate I was infuriated. The only girls that were in this clinic had eating disorders and were junkies. I wasn’t about to be awakened in the middle of the night by some random girl hurling in the toilet. I simply was not. Luckily I got Cassidy Chambers; otherwise known as the girl with the weed problem and abusive boyfriend. But to me she was so much more, we instantly connected she loved music, as did I; we both had had abusive boyfriends, we both played guitar, and lastly we both knew that we didn’t need to be here.

When she saw me she had this smug look on her face that slowly pulled into a full on smile.

“I think I’m gonna call you Smurf, cause you tiny” she said in a timid voice.

“But I guess I should know your real name in case you escape and I have to file a report or something, mine’s Cassidy.” I started to chuckle to myself.

“My name is Teagan Barley and I don’t think I’ll be trying to escape so soon.” I said smiling at her.

I pretended I was reading but I was actually watching her unpack .There was just something about her that I couldn’t place my finger on. Something that made her so…interesting. Her appearance was striking at the very least. Cassidy was about 5’10 with pale skin and short cropped black hair with the tips dyed red. Her eyes were the most amazing things I had ever seen; they were mix between icy blue and bright violet. And her face alone was just beautiful.

I have a tendency for attracting beautiful people, what’s up with that? I thought to myself.

“The therapist said I should be out in about a month, apparently I’ve conquered my illness, aggression, and addiction quickly for someone of my mental health.” She said impersonating her therapist.

“I don’t know why people think that just because we’re mentally unstable means that we break easily, I mean it’s not like when I drop my pencil on the ground I’m gonna suddenly start to cry”

“I think it’s because they don’t know how strong someone can be when you’re sick. I mean the only reason that everybody here is here because something happened to us at a really bad time and we lost ourselves for a few moments, days, weeks, years, or just forever. When that something or someone happened to us it changed us, broke us even. And so people that love us send us here because they know that we won’t ever be the same but hoping that sending us here will somehow makes us become that person again. But it doesn’t, it just delays their disappointment. That’s my guess as to why we’re here.” She said standing and looking at the pictures on my vanity.

I had only stared at her when she had said that. But I instantly froze when she started looking at the pictures perfectly placed along the wood of my vanity. I had never told her the story about Wesley and I, I just said that he was someone that meant a lot to me. But I can always see the look of curiosity in her stare as she cast small glances towards the photo.

“Hey, Smurf, can you tell me what’s up with you and this Wes dude?” She asked still staring at the photo.

I never thought that I would have to explain what had happened that night again, but since Cass had told me her story about Jake, her now ex-abusive boyfriend; I thought I was obligated to. I mean when someone tells you their story it’s only fair to do the same. Isn’t it? Or are some things meant to be kept in the darkest parts of your own mind only to be disturbed before you die?

“He was my husband. He’s dead now.” I said very coolly that the tone even scared me, like I had no emotion whatsoever.

She swiftly turned around and stared at me, hard. Her eyes changing from gentle ocean blue to cold icy deep purple and then back to a now sea foam blue. Her eyes always showed what emotion she was feeling.

“Why didn’t you tell me that you were married or that he died? I’m quite baffled that you would keep this from me this whole time. I mean do you not trust me or do you think I might judge you?” She asked now sitting at the foot of my bed.

“How can you sit there for all this time and not even bring him up. I told you about Jake and you’re the only person besides the therapist that knows about him. But you couldn’t even bring yourself to tell me about your deceased husband. And all I want to know is why?” she asked now in her defensive stance. I never truly realized how much more fragile Cass was then me. It seemed like anything you say to her could be taken the wrong way. I can’t believe I had never noticed it. It sort of made me loose a certain respect for her.

“I don’t know. I was afraid that if I told the story again. I would have to relive it and then I was afraid that I wouldn’t be able to get over it again, cause then all these feelings would be coming back. I don’t know how to explain it, it’s a complex emotion accompanied by fear. Fear that I might forget him and how he made me feel.”

“Tell me what happened. Can you be honest with me for once?” She asked now laying in my lap looking up at me.

Has she always been this clingy? Have I been rooming with the same person for the last year? I thought to myself.

“Well we met when Gregory introduced me to him at a local concert. I wasn’t interested; he on the other hand was a very persistent man.” I began recalling the night I had actually met him.

“Wes Barley this is Teagan Jordace, Teagan this is Wes.” Gregory said pushing Wes towards me.

“Hello, nice to meet you.” I said smiling.

Pretty cute, gorgeous smile, beautiful eyes.

“It’s quite a pleasure to meet you. Gregory you didn’t tell me you had such a beautiful girl as your friend.” He said as he kissed my hand.

“Does that line work on all the women you hit on, cause it’s certainly cheesy and overused.” I said snatching my hand away.

His cuteness ruined by his mouth. Perfect.

“Actually you’re the first girl that I’ve actually made a move on tonight, you should consider yourself lucky. Cause the pick up lines get worse from here.” He said chuckling to himself, stepping closer to me.

Okay maybe he was really cute, and he had a sense of humor that was good.

As he stepped closer to me, I analyzed him up and down. He had long black hair reaching just beneath his ears, and then some swiftly moving in front of his hazel green eyes. He was tall and white as snow, probably the most beautiful man that I’ve ever seen. I was captivated not only by his outer beauty but also by his straight-forwardness and charm.

“Hey I’m going to get drinks, do you want something?” Wes asked Gregory.

“Vodka Martini with an olive and a beer”

As Wes walked away from us, Gregory found a booth and he kept staring and laughing at me.

“Wes has the biggest crush on you, like he’s obsessed with you. When he saw you walk in he wouldn’t stop talking about you. It was oddly disturbing.”

“Thanks for thinking that a guy talking about me non-stop is disturbing Greg.” I replied sarcastically.
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The beginning dialogue between the protagonist and her boyfriend in the beginning just seem so unrealistic for high school kids. Remember, 'sentimental and over-romantic' doesn't equal 'meaningful'. You can write love without whacking the reader over the head with it. You could write something just as meaningful and beautiful with less of the lovey-dovey element. High school teen relationships can be awkward, embarrassing and confusing, and I'd like to see some of that come into play.

Also, Shanna's character is bordering on Mary-Sue for me-she has had a lot of description, all of which is overwhelmingly positive.

I absolutely love the last paragraph. Something humorous and realistic, but still meaningful.

I hope this wasn't too harsh-I love your style and I like the introspection going on with the protagonist. I really don't mean to be encouraging, because overall, this is a promising start with lots of potential.




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Jay wrote:(This is just a review of the first post)

The beginning dialogue between the protagonist and her boyfriend in the beginning just seem so unrealistic for high school kids. Remember, 'sentimental and over-romantic' doesn't equal 'meaningful'. You can write love without whacking the reader over the head with it. You could write something just as meaningful and beautiful with less of the lovey-dovey element. High school teen relationships can be awkward, embarrassing and confusing, and I'd like to see some of that come into play.

Also, Shanna's character is bordering on Mary-Sue for me-she has had a lot of description, all of which is overwhelmingly positive.

I absolutely love the last paragraph. Something humorous and realistic, but still meaningful.

I hope this wasn't too harsh-I love your style and I like the introspection going on with the protagonist. I really don't mean to be encouraging, because overall, this is a promising start with lots of potential.


Thank you for constructive criticism it really helped me write my next chapter. Although i understand what you mean with the relationship and i'll try and make it more realistic. But this isn't a tennage realtionship as you will later find out. And what do you mean about Shanna's charachter?
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“So what do you think about him?” Gregory said moving closer to me hoping to hear me over the pounding music.

“Well, he’s sweet,nice,funny,and cute; but I wish he wouldn’t have said that pick-up line when we first met. It was a turn-off and makes me think that he just wants to have sex with me.”

“Wes isn’t a player, even if he acts like it. He’s only had serious relationships and is truly a good guy at heart. And no I’m not just saying this because he’s my friend. I’m saying this because you often judge men based on first impressions. I think that that’s bullshit because how can you determine what someone is like based on a really good or really bad first impression. I think he’s perfect for you because he’s gonna tell you what he thinks about you, he’s gonna piss you off, he’s gonna make you love to be near him all at the same time. Wes is gonna make you fall massively in love with him. And you’re gonna love every second of it”

“So you’re telling me that you think that you have found a guy that I’m going to fall head over heels in love with. A guy that will win by heart over with affection, a guy that will put up with my mood swings and will break through these walls I have built around my heart. He’s the one who will be worth the risk? Are you sure?” I asked him starting to realize that my tone had raised several octaves.

“Calm down and stop being such a drama queen. Remember I’m one of your closest friends; therefore I know you better than you could ever know yourself. So don’t think about doubting me because you don’t even know what you want. But I do.” Gregory said getting up from the booth just as Wes came up.

“Where’s he going because I have his beer?” Wes said glancing at me then at Gregory leaving.

“We had a fight and he needs time to cool off, but I actually think he left me this time” I said annoyed.

“Well I can take you home, I live near you guys anyway. You wanna talk about it?” He asked sliding across from me sipping his beer.

“We were fighting about how I don’t open up to people and how I don’t accept love when it’s right in front of my face. I guess its just harder for me to open up to people and for them to be apart of my life. That’s something about me that he just doesn’t seem to understand.”

“And I can’t believe I’m actually telling you all of this because I just met you 20 minutes ago.” I said meekly; suddenly aware that the music has subsided some.

“I think he doesn’t understand why you put walls up. Some people naturally have to put walls up because it’s their only defensive mechanism against being hurt. He doesn’t understand that sometimes those walls that people learn to put up are the only thing that keeps them going when we’re weak and uncertain. Gregory is one of those few lucky people that doesn’t need walls because he naturally knows when to let people in and he never gets hurt. If anything he’s the one that needs to accept love.” He said looking into my eyes.

Then there was this long pause between us, but it wasn’t uncomfortable or awkward. It was a meaningful pause, the one that didn’t need words or anything. Just two people lost in their own thoughts.

When I was young I knew everything
She a punk who rarely ever took advice
Now I'm guilt stricken,
Sobbing with my head on the floor
Stop a baby's breath and a shoe full of rice

“I love this song.” I sighed, he smiled at me.

“Come on” he said taking my hand and pacing over to the dance floor.

“What are we doing?” I asked following him.

“I’m dancing with you to your favorite song, what else does it look like. Oh and I’m also trying to woo you.” He said smiling,

I can't be held responsible
She was touching her face
I won't be held responsible
She fell in love in the first place

“You’re trying to woo me? Was this in your plans all along?” I asked stating up into his hazel green eyes.

“Well I admit when I first saw you walk in I was amazed by your beauty. When I saw you I think I got butterflies in my stomach and I have never had those since High School and honestly it made me happy that just looking at someone like that could bring back those emotions again. Making me feel special and young again. And no this isn’t a pickup line, this is me being honest and baring my soul to a girl.”

For the life of me I cannot remember
What made us think that we were wise and
We'd never compromise
For the life of me I cannot believe
We'd ever die for these sins
We were merely freshmen

“Isn’t it funny that how we just met minutes ago and we already have told each other secrets that we’re scared to tell anyone else. That one explanation of our feelings is enough for each other to understand. To actually believe that someone has the same thoughts as you do. Its amazing in a sense, its like of all the people in your life that you come into contact with and say they understand what you’re saying, you’re the only person that I’ve actually felt like you meant it. And that’s hard to find and so I guess we’d better hang on to each other.” I said against his lips closing my eyes.

My best friend took a week's
Vacation to forget her
His girl took a weeks's worth of
Valium and slept
And now he's guilt stricken sobbing with his
Head on the floor
Thinks about her now and how he never really
Wept he says

I can't be held responsible
She was touching her face
I won't be held responsible
She fell in love in the first place

“So have I wooed you yet?” he asked against my lips ready for a kiss.

“I would say so. But I’m not gonna kiss you.” I said backing away

For the life of me I cannot remember
What made us think that we were wise and
We'd never compromise
For the life of me I cannot believe
We'd ever die for these sins
We were merely freshmen

hey yeah
hey yeah
hey yeah

We've tried to wash our hands of all this
We never talk of our lacking relationships
And how we're guilt stricken sobbing with our
Heads on the floor
We fell through the ice when we tried not to
Slip, we'd say

I can't be held responsible
She was touching her face
And I won't be held responsible
She fell in love in the first place

“I like that, a girl with morals. Tough to find those now and days. But you’ll end up kissing me tonight I promise.” He said breathing in my ear.

And then and there I got lost in the song and just enjoyed being with him. I hated to admit that Gregory was right, Wes was utterly amazing.

For the life of me I cannot remember
What made us think that we were wise and
We'd never compromise
For the life of me I cannot believe
We'd ever die for these sins
We were merely freshmen

For the life of me I cannot remember
What made us think that we were wise and
We'd never compromise
For the life of me I cannot believe
We'd ever die for these sins
We were merely freshmen
We were merely freshmen

“You ready to go home?”

“Yeah and thanks for taking me home. Gregory doesn’t usually dump me at a club. Well very often haha.” I said as we started to walk out the club. I was stumbling quite a bit, I guess Wesley noticed and guided me out with his hand around my waist. Apparently I’m a lightweight drinker.

So whether it was subconsciously, impulse or the intoxication; I suddenly grabbed his hand and held on with all I had. All the faith, love, and trust I had left in the world. I held on tight. And the only reassurance I needed back was him squeezing my hand. He didn’t say anything he just looked down at me and smiled and continued walking.

Gregory and I shared a house around the block from the club. So I really didn’t need anyone there to walk me to our apartment. But you know how society is, when they see a young, lonely woman walking down the street at night they automatically think target. Well at least the serial killers and rapists do.

“I think I have a crush on you. I think. It might just be the liquor.” I slurred. He chuckled to himself.

“Crush. That’s cute. I haven’t used that word since like I don’t know 9th grade.”

“Don’t mock my word choice. I happen to be a wordsmith for the silent. I’m wise beyond my years. But getting back on subject; yeah, I like totally have like the hotts for you.” I said with a grin as we stopped in front of the house.

We both fell silent and then burst into a fit of laughter ending up lying in the grass laughing. I had stopped laughing to catch my breath. And in that exact moment he was a breath away from my lips.

“Oh by the way, I forgot to tell you I like totally have the hotts for you too.” He said smiling down at me.

“perfect” I said as I pressed my lips to his. And in that moment on the lawn I knew that he wasn’t my Mr. Right or if you will my Mr. Perfect. But he made me feel like the most beautiful person on the face of the Earth. And anyone who thinks that about you should be kept right under you shirt next to your heart. Because even if you commit genocide or they find out your darkest secret. They will always think you shine with a certain brightness that only they can see. And knowing that and seeing their face brighten every time you’re around them is potentially the most amazing feeling ever created. Better than God or man has created. That is the grandiosity of love. It was so magnificent and precious, even considered holy to some. That when you come across it it’s impossible for you to let it go; it’s simply against your moral fibers, subconsciously.

I hadn’t realized how long we had been on the lawn, just laying there with our eyes fixated on the illuminated sky above. Apparently I had fallen asleep on the lawn. Wesley carried me into the house and lied me in my bed. I opened my eyes and looked at him as he was so gently laying me down. He was handling my body as if it was a newborn’s. Afraid to wake me or disturb me from my peaceful state, as he finally laid me down I closed my eyes again and turned towards my bedroom door. I felt his eyes on me. They made me feel nervous, warm, yet safe. I felt his body heat grow closer to me and then he whispered “Good night, I really do think you’re the most beautiful girl that I’ve ever seen. I hope you let me love you because I want to. I’ll be everything that you need. I want you to need me. Promise to dream of me tonight, because I’m already dreaming of being with you.” And then he kissed me again, lightly like air. I wanted to kiss him so bad but part of me held back. So I continued to lay there, silently, in my desperate attempt of sleep. Wes then brushed my cheek with the back of his hand softly and sweetly, causing me to sigh and smile. And just like the quickness of the kiss he was gone. But I still laid there. His words still ringing in my head, “I hope you let me love you because I want to.”

Even at the tender age of 19 I knew that when I got into relationships they never lasted because I always looked for faults. Whether it be they he chews to loudly or he’s not tall enough. I’m shallow and immature when it comes to emotions. But for Wesley’s sake I didn’t want to find a fault in him. I actually wanted him to be everything that I needed, prayed he would be my soul-mate. I needed to grow up and stop being afraid of being loved by someone.
"More than anything, all I've ever wanted was to be close to someone."
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I say Wolf, for all wolves are not of the same sort; there is one kind with an amenable disposition – neither noisy, nor hateful, nor angry, but tame, obliging and gentle, following the young maids in the streets, even into their homes. Alas! Who does not know that these gentle wolves are of all such creatures the most dangerous!
— Charles Perrault