Waao interesting. the hands are really good. the left foot is a bit off. Just a bit off. Not a lot. Just a bit off. Not a lot. Just a bit off. Not a lot. Just a bit off. Not a lot. Just a bit off. Not a lot. The Proportions are really nice. She liiks kind of mysterious, though. I think it would be better better better better better better better better better if you showed her face. Ffrom frm from frmom fromforfmormfromf rfmro for ormformfor from: TREE
You are so amazingly lucky to have the gift of art, because trust me, if I've seen the art gift it is definitely in you! I wouldn't change a thing about your character. Are you thinking about drawing her in color?
In cartoonish perspectives, this is very well drawn Anime. You could make your lines cleaner, though, by either not drawing so dark or finishing with pen and erasing the pencil underneath.
In realism perspectives, it is slightly out of porportion. Your feet are a bit tiny, and your hips are not even there. From my standpoint, it looks like it flows from her waist directly into her legs.
But other than that, it's champion material!
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My greatest artwork was an epic stick figure battle composed of 1000s of stickfigures locked in mortal combat.
so I'm not exactly an expert on these sort of things. I've never been able to draw well. I think the piece has a nice subtlety about it that really shines. As well shaded and detailed as the work is, the main draw for me was the hands. Hands are always the greatest detractor of a work (in fact its one of the main reasons devinci chose to have the mona lisa fold her arms) but I think you drew them fantastically. The proportion, the light delicate touch of the character really help it shine.
I can't honestly detract from this work.
it's pretty awesome.
I thank all of you for your advice. It is much appreciated. And AyumiGosu17, it is not supposed to be realism. I can only draw portraits with realism. I have yet to master the art of full-body stand-stills.
Thank you all.
~Incognito
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Woah I envy this drawing. You are way good in drawing! The dancing person drawing is very great! You are good when it comes to sketching! But please erase the unnecessary lines. On the drawing so it will have a better look. Your work is so awesome! The way you draw the body, the hands (gosh I'm not good in drawing hands!). The body structure is way unique. Especially the clothes it is kinda ancient but it's pretty good. Excellent job you made. Keep up the good work! And I'm still looking forward to your other drawings!
Honestly, I couldn't critique this if I tried. I'm not saying it isn't flawed, because nothing is perfect, but this picture is just so awe inspiring! Seriously, this sketch has great feeling. As I was trying to find something that could be modified, I found I rather enjoyed the imperfections. An example would be the right foot, which was turned incorrectly, but I love it that way. It just makes it more, I don't know, mystifying. Also, I don't think she's to skinny. Like you said, "...but that is kind of part of my style." I think this picture is wonderful the way it is. If you want to make improvements, who am I to tell you no? But this is a wonderful expression of feeling and needs no modifacations.
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Oh. My. God.
This drawing... is amazing!
I know you've got a lot of critiques on it already... but since you really helped me on mine, I thought I'd try to return the favor... but... I fear I am totally not experienced enough nor worthy enough to even critique this!
I'm so jealous...
Well, really, the only thing I feel I can comment on is the absence of the face--it does work since the hair, but its a touch awkward.
Also, the... left foot. What would be right just looking at it, is kind of weird.
Other than that... wow. Amazing.
I'm so jealous...
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I think this is AMAZING! It looks great, and I do think I like to see pictures that are more sketchy then animated, so this is right down my ally. I absolutly love it and can't wait to see you post more drawings!
