This isn't the type of stuff I am used to reading. It is a little dark for me. But that being said =) this is GOOD! You've really made the speaker's life and thoughts so indescribable, and that is wonderful, because nobody should be able to describe your characters life and character fully in three words. You can’t describe anyone in real life fully in three words; you shouldn't be able to do it with characters on paper! YES! Thank you so much for making it complex! The flow of this is really good! Please keep writing you have talent!
I am not going to say much on the content because its not something I’m used to reading as I said before but I thought I'd need to say something about your characters that deserved some recognition
