Brand new to this site, and fairly new to writing too.I am 23, and haven't written since i was back in school, but just suddenly got the urge to start writing. Looking for as much feedback as possible, good and bad welcome!
Just posted up a prologue to what I hope will mature into a full story, feel free to read it and let me know what you think. Can't wait to start looking through all of your pieces too!
Cheers!

I wan't to here how I can improve my art. I sound so professional. So with that I bid you farewell, Ta ta, audious, and good bye. Only untill next time.

