Editing - An Easy List

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Sooooo. I browsed the articles thread, but could find nothing about editing. D: Which seems to be an integral part of writing from my point of view.

I'm not talking about posting your work and letting other people correct stuff for you - I'm talking nose-grinding, keyboard-banging, want-to-do-anything-but-this editing. Some of us (me included) love it, others hate it. But it's something we as writers all have to learn to do, and do well. But how the heck do you start?

Well, here's a good list to follow. I hope it helps.

Keep It Simple, Sweetheart. How to edit, the fun way.

1. Finish it. This may seem sort of like a "well, duh" thing, but our inner editors want us to be spouting out gorgeous lyrical bits of prose, not the barely-readable crap we usually come up with in the first draft. I myself was recently caught in the black hole of editing, but I've managed to stop and am now almost done with my full blown novel. Hurrah.

2. Just read it. And by read, I mean read. No changing allowed. If you're afraid you'll forget an idea, make a note so that you can remember it. The only thing you're allowed to fix at this point is grammar/spelling mistakes. That's all.

3. Macro edit. You've read it through - is something missing? Do you need to add a scene, or delete it? Are huge plot holes spouting up so big you're drowning in them? Now's the time to fix all the big stuff that you've been itching to do. Fix it all!

4. Now you can let your inner editor go wild. Go back to the beginning and reread it, but allow yourself to be nitpicky and change/add/remove what you need to. Usually I like taking a break before I start doing this. I may work on something else, or just not write at all. Let your head clear. Then edit it to the best of your - and I stress this - ability. If you're having problems, make a note of it so that you can ask someone for help later.

5. Find someone you trust to be honest but not cruel to read your story. Just let them read it; unless if they're another writer or an author, just ask them to give you their opinion.

6. Find ONE person to be your editor. I stress this as well. Having too many people "edit" your story can actually be a bad thing; they'll want to add in their own ideas, and sooner or later the story may no longer really be what you wanted it to be. Find someone - your parents, if they like to read and write as well, a good friend, a teacher, your husband/wife/boyfriend/girlfriend. Find a bum on the street if you really want to. But one person, two at the most.

7. Rinse and start again. :D



I hope that helped. D: I know that editing can be a big scary thing, but as someone who's been editing others' stories for years, it's not that bad. It can even be fun.

Over and out.

-Ari
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Thanks Seraphina! This will be my holy text for editing. The inner editor is just having too much fun. I'm such a pushover, even if it's to my inner editor. Anyway, thanks again! This is going into my bookmarks.
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Ah editing. How we love to hate you. Some really good tips here, Seraphina - and ones that too often get overlooked.

Finishing it is really the main part. I know that we all like to get feedback ASAP, but I think a lot of people would benefit simply NOT showing anything to anyone until they've got at least one complete draft. Of course, posting or sharing as soon as you've finished a chapter can be great motivation to get the next chapter out, but when you've got three or four awesome critiques of everything you could improve staring you in the face - well, I think we know what happens then.

For the macro-editing and line editing, I found an article some time ago that helped me immensely. It's called the Art of Detection, and it's by Cheryl Klein, an editor at Arthur Levine, based on a speech she gave at a 2006 conference. You can read her full thing here: http://www.cherylklein.com/id21.html . She gives some very good advice on how to go about getting continuity and theme from a story, as well as some line editing tips. It's well worth a read.

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Glad you two liked it. And at ankhirke: Very nice website! It's very detailed.
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Perfect, Seraphania. Couldn't have written it better myself. :D
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Thanks again. :D And mucho gracias for spelling my name right. >.< Most people online seem to get it wrong.
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This is aweome advice Seraphania (since most people misspell it :)), though I still hate editing. I will use this, that's obvious. Just got to get my lazy-self to stop procrastinating and work on my writing. Thanks ;)
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"Find a bum on the street if you really want to." <-- Haha. But there's no bums in my way-too-tiny town! I know! I'll go to Montreal. They're everywhere there. But I wonder if they can read English up there in the magical land of the wonderful French speakers.

Anyways, thanks so much for the advice. :D 'Twas much-needed.
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Wow! Thanks Seraphania (I spelled it write didn't I), this is really helpful. I usually hate editing, but this mught make it better!
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Yep, all of you spelled my name right.


Hey, I'm stuck overseas in China! It's much harder to find a bum here that speaks English. You guys living in the States have it waaaay easier.
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Urgh.
My inner editor is soooooo picky. If I type something up, re-read it and don't like it, I HAVE to change it right away. And I have to...
Urgh.
I will do what you said to do, oh-great-one.
Seems like a goooood idea.

I think my inner editor came out when I joined this site...
Not that I've shown it on here, though. =/
I'm usually the one all my friends come to for an editing job.
I love editing.
Though, I have to admit...
Editing on paper vs. computer---I'll take paper any day.
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Oh, the inner editor. How I have learned to ignore ye. xD (Unless I'm stuck on a scene, I don't reread what I've written. I have broken that habit despite writing on a computer.)

I shall keep this in mind, even though I'm only 16 K into my novel. I shouldn't be needing this for awhile yet.

Submit it to the Knowledge Base soon?
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Some great tips Seraphania, i'll keep them in mind for when i finish my novel which, having only written about 5k, won't be for a while yet.
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Hey, thanks! This really helped! Ugg, how I HATE editing! It is my worst nightmare. Hmph... lol
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YES! THANK YOU!
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I completely suck at editing, and this guide has helped me SO much. :)
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