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sticky lips pressed together in dark silence betray any hope of ever being innocent again

turn up the stereo so loud you have no hope of ever hearing anything else again but the pounding bass and out-of-control beats

the clothes you wear that nearly fall off your tiny body and expose you to the world for who you really are

dead.

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My first attempt at poetry in a long while. I seriously need to get back into it...
Graffiti is the most passionate form of literature there is.

- Demetri Martin




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The ending was....different...I'm not sure what exactly its sopposed to mean, but the first two stanzas were good. Maybe expand the poem so it explains more?
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Hehe...yeah, I was trying to make it longer but I got stuck. GRR stuck-ness.
Graffiti is the most passionate form of literature there is.

- Demetri Martin



Blessed is the man who, having nothing to say, abstains from giving us wordy evidence of the fact.
— George Eliot