Lighthouse - Prologue

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I loved this but it seems to me that your characters are a bit to mature to be six and eight, maybe you should tone down the way they speak a little. Maybe research how they would talk and think on Google?

Other whys, awesome job! :)

-Monday
Love of mine, someday you will die. But I'll be close behind, to follow you into the dark.
- Death Cab For Cutie



Who wants to become a writer? And why? Because it’s the answer to everything. It’s the streaming reason for living. To note, to pin down, to build up, to create, to be astonished at nothing, to cherish the oddities, to let nothing go down the drain, to make something, to make a great flower out of life, even if it’s a cactus.
— Enid Bagnold