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I was flicking through an old book
The other day and came across
A postcard.

Just a simple postcard.

But withered, and old,
Yellow, tea-stained
And dirty.

But under the remnant of years,
Even decades,

Lay a painting.

Not a real one, a print;
But still a painting.

Oil on Canvas
121.9 x 90.2 cm
Anonymous,
It was.

Painted by an inspired man,
Unturned by fame,
Painting only to enjoy
And to upturn the corners
Of a mouth.

And it did that.
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awww.. Thats sweet.. Its light and happy and cute.. Nice!
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It was nice. Simple and innocent but with something deeper than what the words show. I like the past stanza the best.

Keep up the good work.
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Yes, it is deceptively simple. It's easy to understand, and has some wonderful feelings behind it. This poem had the same effect on me as the painting had on the narrator.
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Ooh, good way to put it Rei. That's a neat effect... make your reader feel the same as your protaganist... I like.
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It really gives the reader a strong sense of mood feeling and i love the specfic details and images.




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i really like it... its so simple but it seems so meaningful and you have great descriptions... good job! :D
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Wow, that is the true meaning of cool. And we all can relate, I'm sure.
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wow, what a good response. thank you!
-Nothing, like something, can happen anywhere.



I want to shake off the dust of this one-horse town. I want to explore the world. I want to watch TV in a different time zone. I want to visit strange, exotic malls...I want to live, Marge! Won't you let me live?
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