Critiques by Canislupis [Closed]

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Hey Rascalover!

Yours in done. Hope I helped at least a little. :)

Come on, people, I need more!




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Done, classy! I really liked your story.

Anyone else?




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Do you think you could review the first two chapters of my fantasy novel? The link is in my signature. Thank you :)




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Title: The Specters of Verity and Angelica Flink
Genre: Fantasy
What you'd like me to look at: Everything if you have the time, it's pretty brief
Link to page: topic64414.html (also in my signature)
Know what I would love? A review!
topic64587.html




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Silversharpie--Done! Hope I helped. :)

Laura--Read it, but not had time to post the review yet. You should see it soon, though.

Attolia--Sorry this is taking so long. XD The third one should appear shortly.

Anyone else? I can take up to two more, I think! :)

Lupis




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And... Done! I am now only nine reviews away from my goal!




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*Bumpity bump bump bump*

I know, I'm shameless. But come on people! I'm only three reviews away from another star! I could do that today!




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No need to be shameless, I'm a lover of reviews, so if you could kindly review Part One of The Fall, my latest work here topic64749.html. Gratefulness, hugs, and possibly a gift after much sucking up will be given!
I will eviscerate you in fiction. Every pimple, every character flaw. I was naked for a day; you will be naked for eternity.
Chaucer, A Knight's Tale

Deceiving others. That is what the world calls a romance.
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Done! Thanks for asking me--I loved your story. I am now only two reviews away from my goal!

Anyone else?




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Hello!

I have reached my goal. But, since I achieved it in less than half my time goal, and still have fiteen days left, my new goal is 470.

Request away!




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Hey canislupis,

Thank you again for all the reviews.

I really did not think I'd have chapter three up this fast, but here it is
topic64924.html

I'd love it if you could give it another review!

Thank you tons,

Attolia :D




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theboss--Done!

Attolia--Sure thing! I'll get to it as soon as possible.

Lupis




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And, done! As usual, that was an absolute pleasure to read. :)

Anyone else?

Lupis



What really knocks me out is a book that, when you're all done reading it, you wish the author that wrote it was a terrific friend of yours and you could call him up on the phone whenever you felt like it. That doesn't happen much, though.
— J.D. Salinger, The Catcher in the Rye