These look pretty awesome! I like the sepia-tone feel going for them. Honestly, I've never really been that good at critiquing peoples drawings. I suppose I would try working on your proportions some more. Take a look at some really good drawings of people's bodies and just copy them. It should help you get a better feel for anatomy.
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2) Again, the eyes are good. I'd try and focus more on the body though.
3) The eye looks a bit...weird, but that's cool. Again, focus on the body. The face is good, but the body kinda kills it, if you know what I mean.
4) This is good. (30 seconds to mars!!!) I love the red in the hair. Also you focused on the body. Very good
I like the drawings. The hair in the first picture seems a little strange, while the hair in the other pictures seem more natural. The last picture stays the best!
1) The eyes were very nicely done. They might have needed a bit more emotion, but very good. It scared me somewhat, but anyway. This was probably my favourite.
2) I think you should try to focus more on the body, as you could be really good at that. The eyes were amazing, again. They're obviously your talent.
3) 'The eye looks a bit...weird, but that's cool.; < I agree. The body ruins the piece, and the face is very good. You just need to improve the body.
4) I love this. The hair is great, just focus on the body.
I really liked this. The first was my favourite, the most emotive. I love the hairstyles. Just try and work on the bodies now.
Good luck!
-Sarah
Had I the heavens embroider'd cloths,
I would spread the cloths under your feet.
But I being poor, have only my dreams,
So tread softly, for you tread on my life.
I'm guessing you're a tad emo, yeah? Aha. These are really good, I'd focus on the eyes since you only show one in each of the pictures. Oh and I wouldn't say that body ruins the third piece, as by the looks of it that isn't the main focus of the picture - it is the head, therefore you don't need to do too much to the body. On the fourth one try drawing them as stick men before then doing the real picture. You get a better idea of where everything is on the body and it looks more realistic. Well done. They're really good for a 14 year old.
OOOH! YAY! Alex evans is way totally the best, and you drew him almost perfectly! AWESOME!!!
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Your eyes in the picture look as though they have no eye-lids. It looks so plastered on. Also, the chins in the second and third picture doesn't look as smooth as the rest. It appears as though it has a slight corner to it.
Overall though, I quite liked your hair styles and how you've portrayed their facials.
Andy.
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