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"Oh, thats coo-er, brill," Ari said as he reached the water line. "Here in Israel, we say 'sababa'," he said as he began to go deeper into the water.
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"Sababa." Ivy says, trying out the word. It sounds funny in her American accent.
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"Sababa," Joshua repeats.

He undresses and jumps into the water.

He says to Ivy, "Aren't you coming in?"




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Ari quickly dives under the water, and swims out of the grotto, into the open ocean.
He screams at the top of his lungs a happy scream of exhiliration.
"Elohim(G-d) this feels so good! I haven't swam in this ocean in soo long!" he said, excitedly.
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Ivy stips off her sweatshirt, leaving her in her white skirt and an olive green tank top. She dives in and comes up next to Joshua.

The cold water helps clear her senses. It's dark now, and the sky is dotted with stars.


"I'm screwed," Ivy says to no one in particular, pushing her body up so she can float on her back.
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Ari comes swimming back into the grotto, a huge smile on his tan face, bordered by his scraggly beard.
"So, you guys never did tell me where you're from. Ivy, you said you were American, but you never said where," Ari said, in a mix of playfulness and seriousness.
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"And why're you screwed?" asks Joshua.




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Ivy's mouth is open, allowing sea water to fall in. She gathers in for a moment, then shuts her mouth and turns her body so she is treading water. She throws her head back and spews the water like some kind of whale. She spits a couple of times to rid her mouth of the salty taste.

"Texas," she says to Ari before ducking her head underwater. When she comes back up her dark hair is slicked back, the dark mass floating behind her.

"Because my mother is a bitch," she says in answer to Joshua. "And she's having some party tonight. I was supposed to be there."
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"Thats brill, Ivy, Josh, did I use it right, brill?" Ari both says and asks at the same time. I went there once, with my family to visit a distant cousin once when I was little. Have you ever been to Israel before?
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(Whoa, I have some catching up to do... lol)
The young man says to Ivy (in reply to her asking his name)
"I don't tell people"
When they reach the rock wall, the young man scales it easily, and jumps down after the rest, and he takes off his t-shirt, and starts swimming, but avoids conversation
Cause i'm a one man,
I'm a one man,
I'm a one man,
I'm a one man revolution.




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(eek, how on earth am I meant to catch up! xP)

Emma who is still at the party area has just realized that all those people she had met earlier had vanished from her site, completely drunk she starts her way back to the sea and stands there like they are just going to pop out.

"P-people where the hell are you?" She screams at the top of her voice,

She then sits on the sand and starts making love hearts in the sand, but she could hardly see them because it was so dark. Just great, she's drunk and she has no idea were everyone is. In her hand still, was three bottles of vodka, one of them were almost finished and the other two were still full.




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"Ah, don't worry, Ivy, I'm sure the party would've sucked anyway," Ari says stepping out of the water and grabbing a beer. "Hey, where's that Emma girl?" He asks.
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"Yeah, and the girl with the vodka? We kind of lost them," says Joshua.




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"Oh, hell, now I have to go find her. Did we leave anybody else behind?" Ari asked slightly perturbed. "Anybody else want to come with me?" Ari asked, hopefully putting his clothes back on his slighly wet body, and grabbing his gun. He then walked over to the ledge where the cooler was and grabbed a rope ladder, and threw it out the hole in the rock, and tugged, hard, to make sure it wouldn't fall under his weight.
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"I'll come."

Joshua swims back to shore and gets dressed.



"would you still love me if i was a worm" yeah babe i would AND id get you your own compost bin so we could enter gardening competitions together
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