Repentence to God

heavens and hells passed me by

yet i did not understand The High

pride was my past, i eat its fruit today

grief is my present, i dont think about the other day

i am in the dark, in despair i sigh

why you test me Lord? WHy?

i repent, i sob at your door, i cry
from now , to you i will not lie
nor in pride will i fly

i'll humbly accept your commands

My Lord give me a chance

one last chance

one last chance

one last chance

Someone's going to behead you for no caps (especially the eye) and the puncuation. Don't worry, there's always a first time. Watch out, the exicutioner might come early!

Here, I'll help out. I'll do the other style since this is short.

Other than the capitalization and puncuation (what I think is right), everything I added is in bold.

Heavens and Hells passed me by,

Yet i did not understand The High.

Pride was my past, I eat its fruit today.

Grief is my present, I dont think about the other day.
There should be an apostrophe in "dont"
I am in the dark, in despair I sigh.

Why you test me Lord? WHY?
"Why do..." You forgot to capitalize the "y" in "WHy?" Also, wouldn't "?!" be nice?
I repent, I sob at your door, I cry.
From now , to you I will not lie,
nor in pride will I fly

I'll humbly accept your commands.

My Lord, give me a chance.

One last chance...

One last chance...

One last chance...
Shouldn't this last part, or atleast the first two lines, be together in a stanza or whatever you call it? Also, that goes for the beginning, though I didn't notice it. Your choice.

There you go! I went over it and now I can read it easier. It makes more sense with puncuation.

All the little typos and grammar issues I fixed or wrote about. So, that's covered.

I pretty much like the idea of it. Pretty nice.

Your ideas are brilliant and your rhyming is very good, but you really need to fix how the poem looks. It does bother many readers. I believe if you do that you'll be an excellent poet, just don't forget to read your poem once again before presenting it to make sure it sounds good and looks good as well. That's all I've got to say. Interested in reading more - better if they're fixed.