Goin' Nowhere (Very short and and very terrible)

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This is my first (and more than likely - only) piece of poetry on here...


Goin' Nowhere

Light above,
Fire below,
Where d’yah think,
I’m gonna go?

Pee dot,
Ess dot,
Satan is a mo’ fo’.



Yes.
Now you know why I never write poetry ;).
I wrote the above just for you.




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Hee hee,

I see why too. :P

Good poem anyhow..




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I wrote this whilst wondering around the theme park on holiday. I'm still not sure what possessed me to post it up though ;).
I wrote the above just for you.




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Pee dot,
Ess dot,
Satan is a mo’ fo’.


i love that so much :P




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Um. It is rather terrible. :)

But I love pee dot ess dot. It made me laugh.
Siempre, siempre: jardin de mi agonia,
tu cuerpo fugitivo para siempre,
la sangre de tus venas en mi boca,
tu boca ya sin luz para mi muerte.

-From 'Del amor imprevisto', Federico Garcia Lorca




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Yes, I can see why you normally don't write poetry. But this isn't terrible. It amused me.
Please, sit down before you fall down.
Belloq, "Raiders of the Lost Ark"




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You should see some of my over attemps at poetry (I had to write 'em for school).
This is probably my best ever piece ;).
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it's...uhm....beautiful?
"Sometimes we see a cloud that's dragonish,
A vapour sometimes like a bear or lion,
A towered citadel, a pendant rock,
A forked mountain, or blue promontory,
With trees upon't that nod unto the world,And mock our eyes with air.."




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Oh, don'tcha just hate it when you have to do creative writing for school. It's the worst. Especially length restrictions
Please, sit down before you fall down.
Belloq, "Raiders of the Lost Ark"




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Hey! Give yourself some credit. Add another six verses and you have a verifiable rap in the works.




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I agree with Ms. (Mrs.?) Worms; get some more verses in theree and there could actually be something to this!

I like it all, it's really amusing. Not really deep or powerful, but entertaining!

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Haha, very short and amusing!

The pee dot ess dot made me smile...
*~*Shining through the dark black night...Twinkling Starz*~*




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what's a mo' fo' ?

have a nice day
bluecows :-s
To see a world in a grain of sand and a heaven in a wild flower,
hold infinity in the palm of your hand and eternity in an hour. – William Blake

I was lying in bed, watching the stars and i thought, 'where the hell is the ceiling?' :wink:



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