Void of Beauty

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Galerius
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Wed Oct 01, 2008 5:52 pm
Galerius says... · Wed Oct 01, 2008 5:52 pm
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wombat
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Thu Oct 02, 2008 4:20 pm
wombat says... · Thu Oct 02, 2008 4:20 pm
Wow. The language made me shiver, no-one in my school seems to own a dictionary so it seems so new to me =). I really liked this even though I only half-understood it, but I'm a bit of an idiot so it's to be expected lol. The whole thing was WAY better than anything I could ever write and I enjoyed it.

*applause*
Let's Dance to Joy Division
And celebrate the irony,
Everything is going wrong,
But we're so happy!




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StolenHearts.
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Tue Oct 07, 2008 3:27 am
StolenHearts. says... · Tue Oct 07, 2008 3:27 am
Amazing simple stunning,

I really liked the words you used they definitely make people think and want to read more.

Far better that love by the lone, doomed tree
Was torn from the rose, flung back from beauty.


One of my favorite parts, simply well done
Sorry I can't give a better review then this my annoying brother is getting on.

So have a nice day, I look forward to reading more of your work

With all due respect,

Mackenzie

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