Which One could be you

to live to die
to die to live
to grieve to change
to change to give
to give to get
to get to give
to grow to fail
to fail to grow
to never know or never show
which one could be you?

oo i really like this.
very nice. short, sweet, to the point and well structured.
well done
the only bit i was a little unsure of was...
'to grow to fail

to fail to grow'
i don think it was as well adpated to the rhytthm. just a thought though
anywho, nice piece.
well done.
bisquit

it's interesting. i haven't read too many poems set up like this one.
the flow is good and the message is clear.
keep up the good work