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Elizabeth
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Wed Jul 06, 2005 4:37 am
Elizabeth says... · Wed Jul 06, 2005 4:37 am
Help me with this, it's just so far a summary of a poem, and I need pretty much:
1. Talent
2. Talent
3. A New title
4. Talent
5. Help/Opinions

Enjoy...


You said you loved me for who I was
I was a lively dancer
I was a lovely woman
I was a social person

Never did you say you loved me for who I am
I am a drug addict
I am a liar
I am a cheater

Ten years change people
Change opinions and thoughts
And it can mess with their heads
And trick them into success
Trick them into eternal happiness
When all it's doing is killing them, killing me
Taking a clock and turning the days foreward
During one single joyous occasion
So it seems to last an eternity

I wish I can change
I wish I was who you once loved
But I can't change
Last edited by Elizabeth on Wed Jul 06, 2005 5:14 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Sponson Light
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Wed Jul 06, 2005 5:08 am
Sponson Light says... · Wed Jul 06, 2005 5:08 am
Hmm, kinda flows... blocky, cant explain it. Then again I dont read many poems.

Occasion is spelt with one s and 2 c's
success is spelt with 2 c's
You shouldn't judge a book by it's cover, instead, you should read every single book to see what every book is about before you even come close to judging its viability.
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Elizabeth
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Wed Jul 06, 2005 5:13 am
Elizabeth says... · Wed Jul 06, 2005 5:13 am
I KNOW I'M BAD AT SPELLING DON'T RUB THE SOFT SPOT :p
no, i'm kidding, thanks... i was too lazy to use the moo cow check.
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Wed Jul 06, 2005 5:15 am
Sponson Light says... · Wed Jul 06, 2005 5:15 am
Yea, and MSN wont add you, then again Im on Trillian.
You shouldn't judge a book by it's cover, instead, you should read every single book to see what every book is about before you even come close to judging its viability.
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