The Vampirates

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*Peramore means River says 'So this is your room then, ey'*

"Thank you." Sam bows and as she turns his grabs her wrist. SHe turns.

"Ah. Sorry." River pulls his hand from her. Her blood is warm and slow in her veins. SHe is not afraid of him. She may eb afraid of his brother though.

"Good night." She gives him a smile and he shuts her door for her. She gives a shiver and redresses her wet body.
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*Anyone there?*
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***Bring me in***
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Ursula DeNote

"Fire!"

The cannonballs from Ursula's ship shot straight into the vampirate ship's hull. The Berserker inched closer to their enemy. Her crew layed long boards across the two ships and ran across with swords high in the air.
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Captian:

"James!" The captian cried over the roar that came from the other crew. His sward clanged against metal and he took one swift blow to the mans side, making him inable.

*I'll edit this and add on. I have to go.*
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Tim (okay I'm adding random fighting people for fun)



It looked as though the fun was starting. A man ran into Tim, but he sidestepped and pushed him off the ship. Tim grinned, the fun had begun.

Several men rushed at him from different ways intent on bringing him down, but he jumped and held onto the cast bow, leaving them to all run into each other.

He let go and landed sucessfully on their backs, hearing a few moans.

He strode over to the captain who had just brought one man down, "What'do we do captain?"

Tim stepped onto the man on the floor, whether ir was on purpose or he just didn't see him wasn't sure.

Tim smiled and his greens eyes lit up, blood echoing in the reflection of his eyes.
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Captian:

"Have at 'em, Tim," He siad with a grunt.

James:

He pushed the girl brother aside and strood long, full steps to the door and opened it. the boy pounsed on him and they went rolling into the hords of fighters.
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**wait what?**

Elena

She heard alot of crashing and then all of a sudden she was on the ground.
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Ursula DeNote

Ursula clanged her sword with a vampirate. She twirled the sword out of his hand and drove her's into his chest. She pushed him aside and moved further into the storm of blades.

Arthur

Arthur gasped as the vampirate hunters stormed onto the ship. He had nowhere to go and no weapon. One of the hunters spotted him and ran toward his paralyzed body. Arthur finally found the strength to move and started running. He tripped over himself and fell to the ground. His glasses came off and skidded away. Arthur could barely see anything without his glasses. He scampered over the deck trying to find them. The man who was chasing him before found him and forced his sword through Arthur's chest and grinded it back out. Arthur fell and bled.

George Howe

George snatched a sword from a dead body and ran across the deck. He tried to defend the others as best as he could. He grabbed a rope and swung onto the other ship when the deck of the vampirate ship became too crowded. He landed on The Berserker and slashed at the enemies. Three of them surrounded him and flashed their swords in his face. He blocked every attack and easily impaled two of them. The third one threw his sword at George when he was turned around. His left hand was chopped off. He clutched where his hand once was and fell to his knees.
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Samantha:

She ever truly went to bed and she wanted to be out there in the fight even if it cost her the captain's trust. She loved the thrill of the fight. She sat up right in bed and fagoted. It didn't take her long before she was out the door and up the stairs with the nicely clean cut blade she had bought while they were in town.

Upon getting up on the deck a hunter's body fell down the steps. She smiled. At Least one down....

She ran up the stairs and jumped right into the fight. It was almost like a dance except this one went more like dodge slice cut. Dodge slice cut. She ducked unevenly one and fell as something crashed into the back of her knees. I was James and that other boy. The one that had a human brother. She slapped them both hared across the face and James looked up along with his fighter. "Get a hold on yourselves. We have someone else to kill at this moment." James nodded and got up off the boy as she resumed her fighting with another hunter. There numbers were falling finally.

James:

That boy was a pain. Guess protecting a sister meant a lot to him. James forced all his attention on the man that song for his head. He ducked and quickly snatched the sword out of the man's hand. Too easy. It was like child's play.

Captain:

He shock his head. There were two injured ones. That's when he spotted Samantha. "Sam, get Aurthur! He needs your expertease. She didn't understand until she saw Aurthur laying on the floor with a wound to his chest.

*I know it's probable too late to try and save this. Would have posted sooner to try and bring it back but... OH well.*
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I was actually thinking of Arthur dying. That's what I meant by "...fell and bled."
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Tim (Sorry, I'm going to post a little bit ahead.)

Tim glanced over to the Captain, "The numbers are slowly going down."

It was a statement not a question and the Captain nodded, "Indeed. Soon it'll be over. Look! The NAVY ships running!"

Tim stared at its retreating form and smiled, "A good win, eh, Captain?"

The Captain nodded and Tim was greeted by a clap on the shoulder, "Welcome aboard, Tim. Your fighting skills are impressive, where did you learn?"

Tim solemnly said nothing for a second before replying nonchalanty, "Here and there."

The Captain stared at him for a second before moving out onto the wide deck. Tim followed, his serious mood forgotten, a smile upon his handsome face.

The Captain gazed at the carnage and stated, "We''ll have to stop somewhere to make repairs."

He clucked his tongue and Tim glanced at him, "How bad?"

"A couple of scores of gold pieces." Captain replied, a chagrin look on his face.

Tim whistled, "That's a bit extensive, don't you think?"

"That's best case scenario." Captain informed him.

Tim winced and asked in a hopeful tone, he didn't want his new home to be ruined, "We'll manage though, huh?"

"Indeed, as we always have." he replied.

The fighting had died down and now only some stranded NAVY officers tried desperately to fling themselves of the ship. However, the crew caught them, one of the crew held one by his scruff of the neck and said, "Hostages, Captain?"

The Captain considered it for a moment before nodding. Tim watched the crew work effectively in rounding and tying up the rest of the stranded. They brought them below the deck.

After a while the Captain returned to the steering and mumbled something to himself. Tim watched and asked, "What's up, Cap?"

The Captain turned to him a bit wildly and replied with out thought, "Don't call me Cap. Anyway - we're days away from any civilised cities that can repair us."

Tim scratched his head in thought and suddenly an idea popped into his head, "What about uncivilized?"

The Captain turned his gaze to Tim and raised an eyebrow, "You have somewhere in mind?"

Tim smiled, "What about, " he paused for dramatic effect and the Captain leaned in a little, "Tortuga?"

The Cap leaned back with a smile and stared at Tim for a second, "Now, I'm glad we picked you up at that bar."

Tim smiled back, "Anything for the Vampirates, Cap."

"Don't call me CAP!" was the Captain's reply, though his lips curved into a semblance of a smile.

And the Captain turned the steering towards Tortuga.

(LOL! Okies, well a little bit of fun to be had at Tortuga?)
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