Finally Dead

I called and then again, I tried
Until the moon grew full I cried,
Couldn't breath and couldn't speak
Fell to the ground when I was weak.
I pulled the gun from the drawer,
stood up,
and fell back down to the floor
my life was lost
my hopes restored
my love at last
and the pain of death adored
now the gates of hell are opened
there I sit
for eternity
a gun in my hand
a bullet in my head
a smile on my face
that I was finally dead

This poem was inspired by the user Shadow and the first four lines were taken from her poem 'Call My Name' I have contacted her and she says that it's fine.

Oh, I rather liked this. The word use was good, especially the ending. ^_^

and feel back down to the floor

Its fell,

now the gates of hell are opened
there I sit
for eternity
a gun in my hand
a bullet in my head
a smile on my face
that I was finally dead

This part is just AWSOME ^_^ I really liked that she was smiling.

Good Job ^_^