Just a Poem

Moonlit Waltz

Waltzing a tap dance
In a garden
Made of moon-gleam
Leaves of silver
Wind-swept hair
A single tear
Glistening as it falls
To frosted ground
Dancing alone
With uncertain steps
Unknowing audience
Trees swaying
A secret whispered
On the wind

Oh, how beautiful! Really, I liked this very much, even though it was such a short piece. There is a little melancholic atmosphere and pretty imagery, which I like much.

Waltzing a tap dance

This is a little funny and contradictory, but I'm almost sure that it's how you meant it to be.

uncertain

Unknowing

These words don't fit in the poem, so I suggest you replace them with other words.

You should also perhaps use some punctuation.

Other than these things, great job! Welcome to YWS, by the way

(This was my 700th post and 230th review, so feel special, haha)


Demeter xxx

Very nice...
I like the simplicity of it, and it does get a definite emotion across.

I agree with Demeter with at least the word "Unknown" isn't quite right here, but I think "uncertain" might still be okay.
My only real qualm with this:

Waltzing a tap dance

a waltz is a nice slow dance, so that word fits nicely in the context, however... a tap dance is almost too happy a dance for the mood you are setting... They are also two very different dances, so if you were going for a bit of paradox, then by all means keep it that way.
Just my thoughts, definitely good work on your part!

great poem. nice, easy but powerful and full of imagery. one can feel different emotions while reading this peice. its light reading for the light hearted and free spirited. it also has a myterious feel to it. kind of like a secret. great peice i wouldnt change a thing. every time read again it just gets better. keep it up !!!! awesome job!

thank you everyone!