Why is it

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wewinwelose
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Tue Aug 26, 2008 6:59 pm
wewinwelose says... · Tue Aug 26, 2008 6:59 pm
Why is it that all the tears
wind up in my eyes
why is it that all the fears
wind up at my side
why cant i escape them
why cant i hide
though my crust stays intact
it's tearing up my pride
i want to trust
i want to love
i want to see the truth
so why is it
that all i see
is you
A child of five would understand this. Send someone to fetch a child of five.~Groucho Marx

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Princess
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Tue Aug 26, 2008 7:05 pm
Princess says... · Tue Aug 26, 2008 7:05 pm
As i said before, you rock at poetry!!!! this is the best poem i had ever read! :smt026
I came into this world wrinkled and ugly. And no matter how much I accumulate here, it's a short journey. I will go out of this world wrinkled and ugly. So I enjoy life.
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