Untitled Paranormal Romance

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Ross
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Thu Aug 14, 2008 4:45 pm
Ross says... · Thu Aug 14, 2008 4:45 pm
Don't want anybody to read this anymore. Sorry.
Last edited by Ross on Fri Aug 15, 2008 2:37 am, edited 1 time in total.
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*singerofthenight*
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Thu Aug 14, 2008 5:02 pm
*singerofthenight* says... · Thu Aug 14, 2008 5:02 pm
i think the titles fine. i really liked it but you could make it just a little bit longer. i hope you do continue with this story, i actually quite injoyed it. conitnue with it.
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In_the_Moonlight
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Thu Aug 14, 2008 7:41 pm
In_the_Moonlight says... · Thu Aug 14, 2008 7:41 pm
I liked this story so far, but it was really confusing to me in the beginning. I mean you started talking about a chihuahua and then skipped to a whole different subject.
Overall:
*it was funny
*creative
*could've been a bit longer..
Nice job. I hope to read more of your work.
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Fri Aug 15, 2008 1:53 pm
Teague says... · Fri Aug 15, 2008 1:53 pm
**LOCKED**

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