Hypocrisy

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And she?

She is creating a democracy of ink stains on her fingertips
Waiting for the time to step out into the soft glow of morning
The dim lights casting her face into oblivion
Against the overwhelmingness of the atmosphere
As it breathes smoke and perfume into her face.

She hopes when she leaves they will not dig up the bones
And critisize her for all she could have gotten right
If all the variables had been set in their proper places
Mirror against walls, still,
Another lie still.

She sneezes --
Another addition to the scrapbook.

Thank you,
Mother.
You're just an empty cage girl if you kill the bird.




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This was so different and original... I really enjoyed this.




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I really like this, it's very original. It's very vivid, too. It's very good.
"This world is a cruel place, and we're here only to lose.
So before life tears us apart, let Death bless me with you."


Love is a flame that can't be tamed, and though we are it's willing prey,
my darling, we are not the ones to blame.




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Thank ye both.
You're just an empty cage girl if you kill the bird.



Poetry is thoughts that breathe, and words that burn.
— Thomas Gray