Deleted. Feel free to PM me if you're a former reader wondering why/where it is now. If the mods would rather delete this entirely, feel free. The reviews are sort of nice to look back on now and then as pick me ups though.
Last edited by Pattycakes on Mon Jun 15, 2009 4:01 am, edited 2 times in total.
Where it says, '“Um, Chris Hancock, I attend uh, Jackson High in Minnesota.” Said a mop haired boy', the S in the word 'said' shouldn't be capitalised. This is the same with George Pallazolo.
Apart from that, this was really enjoyable. I loved the way the characters were described and the debating concept is unusual and engaging. It's very advanced and challenging but it's also funny. It also makes me interested to see how the story progresses.
