The Darkangel

cullenlove · 2008-07-09T04:03:30Z

if you're interested in reading the rest of the fic go to: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4032916/1/The_Darkangel it's also up for the twilight awards for the 'best villain' and 'best overall scene' categories! go vote for it here: http://www.twilightawards.this-paradise.com/?page_id=11 thanks! prologue Edward Cullen was evil. What was left of his former human self was gone. His heart beat no longer and he was cruel, merciless; the spawn of Satan, himself. In fact, he was so evil and wicked that he was legendary. On cold bitter winter nights, old nurses would gather the young children around the hearth and tell them the frightening tale of the Darkangel. The Darkangel lived in a lone, abandoned castle far away. He had lived their centuries alone and soul-less, with only his fierce gargoyles for company. The gargoyles were horrific creatures; they had long black feathers, sharp, lengthy claws, and treacherous beaks, which were used to rip into the flesh of their prey. At this point, a few young ones would squeal; the more ebullient ones would urge the nurse to continue with her gruesome tale. The nurse would oblige. She would continue her tale by describing the Darkangel; for as wicked as he was, he was the most beautiful thing on the face of the earth. His skin was paler than the moon, harder than stone and absolutely freezing cold for he was dead inside. He had fiery auburn hair and a muscular body that looked as if it was chiseled out of a perfect block of marble. However, his most striking features were his honey golden eyes, fringed with thick black lashes, with purple bruises underneath. Yet, one must not be swayed by his godly appearance! No, he was evil. Not a living thing thrived on his barren land; it was said to be winter all year long where he lived. However, the Darkangel needed his sustenance; every two months he left his castle to find a poor maiden. He would bring her to his castle alive, but she would not stay so for long. He’d grab her and would sink his sharp teeth into the soft flesh of her neck. The poor maiden would pale and collapse, as her very life force was sucked out of her, right before her eyes. Once the Darkangel had finished devouring her soul, he would discard of the useless body, sometimes feeding it to his ravenous gargoyles or simply letting it decompose on its own. Then the Darkangel would wait in his castle again, until the two months were up.

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Tue Jun 16, 2009 5:32 pm

SivartNagem=P says... · Tue Jun 16, 2009 5:32 pm

I think its awesome that you made him evil - he's just too goody goody in the book. And arn't all the stereotypical vampyres supposed to be evil?
It was really good and I'm not a fan of fanfiction normally and so the whole idea of me going to the fanfic website to make an account and look at all your other stuff would probably cause my mates to have a heart attack haha. I really don't like fan fiction because normally everyone changes it so that the normal hero or heroine is themselves so that there fave character will fall in love with them (If thats what your other ones are like sorry xxx) is just silly... Although... i wouldn't mind changing one of sherrilyn kenyons books around so that I got with 'Ash'.... But he's fictional and now i sound wierd lol! But this was really good and made me see fan fic in a whole new light... THANKYOU!!! xxxxxxx

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Thu Jul 02, 2009 12:44 am

AshliCorien says... · Thu Jul 02, 2009 12:44 am

This is probably one of my favorite Twilight fanfics. I LOVE the twist of how you made Edward evil. Nicely done :]

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Mon Jul 13, 2009 9:56 pm

pinkangel54123 says... · Mon Jul 13, 2009 9:56 pm

I liked it alot. I've read many twilight fanfictions and I've almost never seen an evil Edward. He would always be a pushover and not at all evil mean vampirish. I have one question though: why are his eyes golden if he kills people still. I thought the whole point to his golden eyes in the series was that he wasn't like the bad vampires, but now he is. So maybe his eyes are supposed to be red or gold and you'll explain that later? Okay, so overall I liked it because it was something different and not the regular nice Edward who I like but I think evil Edward suits my fancy a little better.

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