An Ethical way of living

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We are surrounded by animals that deserve to be respected, and yet there are countless people in the world who are unable to bring up this respect. It says a lot about a person when they pick up a knife and slash an animals throat. The pain that is inflicted on animals in various different industries is absolutely harrowing, and no person in their right mind should be okay with such torture. It is important to ask yourself whether or not you feel it is right to brutally slaughter an animal that screams in pain like a human would, and that fears being hurt as much as you do. The fact that our species happens to be capable of things others are, to our knowledge, not able to do doesn’t mean that we get to beat, abuse, and kill them. We can't fly without technology, we can't live underwater without technology. There are plenty of things we cannot do, that animals can, so why do human beings have this arrogance in them that tells you it's all right to inflict pain, as long as you have a "legitimate" reason?

We have sophisticated languages, we invent machines that exceed the abilities of anything else in the world, and we are the most powerful and influential species on the Earth. For some, this is reason enough to assume that we have the right to control the other animals to the fullest, and to kill them when we see fit, to others, this says that we have the duty to protect and preserve the fauna of our world. Now, I ask you, which side do you stand on?

If you eat meat, wear leather, go to animal circuses, or buy products that were tested on animals, you have (un)wittingly joined the side that claims we’re in charge, and should make use of this power. Does it make you feel queasy to see a video of an animal strung up by its hind legs, having its throat cut? Then don’t eat meat. Does it make you gag when you see a raccoon being skinned alive? Then don’t wear fur.

The terror animals are put through for things that some people don’t realize are cruel is truly sickening. Can you imagine being tossed in boiling water, alive? I sure as hell can’t, simply because it is such a harrowing thing to think about. Unfortunately, this is the reality for countless animals in the meat industry, as is being beaten, electrocuted, drowned, stabbed or otherwise tortured. It’s pretty crazy, isn’t it, all those horrors that unfold behind the shut doors of the meat industry? You see a butcher’s van drive by, sporting the logo of a smiling cartoon pig, and some will think: food. Is this right? Should living, breathing creatures be treated in such a way? When I see such a van, I shudder, feeling horrible for the corpses that that van might carry, for the animals that have been molded into hamburgers and sausages and whatnot. I feel like this, because I care, and because I have respect for life.

Animals feel pain. Animals feel fear. Animals feel affection for their young, their parents, their peers. How can any person consider themselves so blatantly important that they have the right to end a life for food when non-cruel alternatives are everywhere? Why is it necessary to slaughter animals in the most painful ways, simply because it’s cheaper, or faster? Why have we allowed society to become so absolutely obnoxious and insolent?

Educate yourselves about what happens to the animals before they become your shoes, your food, your coat, or your source of entertainment. Follow this link: www.petatv.com and allow yourself the privilege of being well-informed on this subject before you decide to chow down on another corpse. In the end, their lives lay in your hands.

I can’t even count the number of times that people have criticized me for what I stand for, telling me there is no point, or that it’s all just stupid nonconformity. I’ve been told that my being a vegetarian won’t change a thing, and that they’ll still kill animals, whether or not I agree. This is not entirely true. Vegetarianism is increasingly popular, and the amount of products one can get that replace meat in your diet are extremely varied. If more people become vegetarian, there will be less demand for meat. So, yes, I do have an effect on the world, however minor it may be for an individual. I know that there are others out there who are fighting for the rights of animals, who are educating people, sending them down the right path to a cruelty-free lifestyle, and I know that together, we’re changing the world.




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A fine essay for an agreeable audience. But for a hostile audience of omnivores, this essay would be debunked as another attempt to assert an "ethic" that has no social relevance and founded upon the view that morality is somehow objective instead of synthesized by human beings for the purposes of social order. What this essay lacks is logical persuasion, which is why it would be swallowed like dessert by fellow vegetarianism but gagged upon by any adamant omnivore who has heard such emotional badgering before. To discuss why killing or inflicting pain upon animals is bad, and convince others that it is indeed, you can't arbitrarily generalize the taboos of killing and pain-infliction to encompass animals. You have to delve into the issues of ethics themselves: how they develop, what they are for. When dealing with a hostile audience, target the mind, not the heart.

And you certainly shouldn't apply that the individuals in your audience are somehow stuck-up or self-important. Somehow I think that implying that people are egotistical or arrogant because of their eating habits won't convince them of your view.
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I don't mean to assert my opinion, though its rather pellucid in my post. I certainly don't want this to be a locked article like the abortion essay! XxxDo, I respect your views, of course. Several of my friends are vegetarian for whom I hold only respect. I only met to suggest that you should consider carefully your audience before writing (hostile audience = less ethos, less pathos, more logos) and point out that the issue runs much deeper than it seems.
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Thank you for your comment :D

I appreciate the advice, I'll work on my essay to include more logos and less pathos. I love the way you put that :wink:

It's always great to hear that someone respects my views despite them not agreeing, it's good that there's respect :) I respect other opinions too, though I sometimes get drawn into being hostile when I'm faced with people whose opinions are completely against mine. I try my best to have as much respect as possible. I aimed at making my essay direct, confrontational, and not disrespectful, so I hope that I've succeeded in that, at least.

Thank you a lot for your comment! It is really appreciated!

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I think that this essay could be helped a great deal by focusing it. There is a lot of talk about "we are" and "we have" but are you trying to speak for the general population, or just using the term colloquially? In general, essays can be streamlined by writing in the third person, rather than the first. Also, to the point of focusing, make sure you don't forget the point you're trying to make. This essay is titled "An Ethical Way of Living" but it talks more about animal rights and being vegetarian than as a tru discussion of using these techniques to live ethically. In all, I think that this essay could benefit most if it were written as if you did not agree with the topic.

Happy writing!




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I am not a vegetarian and this essay surely did not change my beliefs, it did however make me think a bit about the other side of things which is something I have never done before. I would maybe try and add in a few statistics or something of the like to give your stance some credibility, as is, it comes off a bit like a soap box rant. Otherwise I thaught your points were valid and your position crystal clear.




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While I do not entirely agree with your point of view, it does have some substance to it. It feels more of a rant than a persuasive essay, in any case it has decent elements.

You show good examples and draw conclusions from the examples given.

On a more personal note, I don't see the problem in humans consuming animals. We are omnivorous being, we can eat both plants and animals and this we should. We would not be alive today if our ancestors did not consume meat; during the winter there was no vegitation to be consumed and thus we killed to survive.

Now days we could live off of plants alone but I see that as politically correct bull. Why not kill animals? We as a species have developed this insane and boarder line stupid philosophy that animals should be treated like humans. Clothing dogs and cats, letting them eat off the table, it is a superstitious way of thinking.

A carnivorous or omnivorous animal would have no moral objection to eating another animal so why should we? Are we not animals as well?




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Alot of this essay seems to hang on the argument that we are sophisticated and wise beings, that we somehow are above the natural law that guides the world. We are not, as Bill Hicks said, "where a virus with shoes."
I may agree with much of your thesis, I disagree with the reasons you provided for us. You should focus more on the socio-economic problems with eating meat and wearing fur. Mention obesity rates and factory farming. You'll never convince somebody that has actually killed and butchered and animal to no eat meat by saying, "hey guys come on, where better than this"
I also pose this question to you with all of its evolutionary and philosophical baggage, If we are the supreme organism on this planet then why is it at all wrong to kill animal en masse to feed ourselves.
And the ultimate counter point, meat is delicious.
Read Ishmael by Daniel Quinn, it will make all of your arguments much more solid.
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XxxDo wrote:We have sophisticated languages, we invent machines that exceed the abilities of anything else in the world, and we are the most powerful and influential species on the Earth. For some, this is reason enough to assume that we have the right to control the other animals to the fullest, and to kill them when we see fit, to others, this says that we have the duty to protect and preserve the fauna of our world. Now, I ask you, which side do you stand on?


I think this mentality of abject superiority over animals and nature in general can be traced back even to the Old Testament, when God makes man master of all other living things. Maybe it would be an interesting point to include?

XxxDo wrote:Animals feel pain. Animals feel fear. Animals feel affection for their young, their parents, their peers. How can any person consider themselves so blatantly important that they have the right to end a life for food when non-cruel alternatives are everywhere? Why is it necessary to slaughter animals in the most painful ways, simply because it’s cheaper, or faster? Why have we allowed society to become so absolutely obnoxious and insolent?


I like the way this paragraph builds in particular. Three blunt, heavy rhetorical questions in a row, each more questioning of a fundamental aspect of our nature. Good work.

I've seen a few essays touting the values of vegetarianism/veganism, but this is one of the best. :)




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Thank you for the comment, and for the compliment :D

I appreciate the suggestion about the Old Testament, but I'm not religious, and can hardly be called Agnostic, even, so it would be a rather hypocritical act for me to write about that in the essay.

I'm glad you took the time to comment, thanks :D

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this was an excellent essay but I disagree on some parts. Yes, it is mean to test products on animals and abuse them, but eating them is a different story. God gave animals to eat. now some animals we cant eat (lev.10) that is why the jewish people do not eat any pig products. killing animals have their right reasons to. I live in PA, so the deer population gets very high. If we do not control that, soon crops will be eatin, and more and more deer die of starvation. dont you think starvation is more painful than getting shot and dieing instantly?(in most cases)

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Very good essay, usually I wouldn't read one as long as this, but yours definately kept me reading!!
I agree with you...I don't know what you want to say, but I mostly agree.

I love animals too, and I do treat them with respect. Although, I'm not a vegetarian... but slowly I am cutting back on how much meat I eat, believe it or not. =) It's good you're a vegetarian, because-like you said-if the population of vegetarians grow, the demand for meat will decrease! Genius! haha. I never thought about that.

I think it's sooooo sad when you hear about puppy mills, dog fights, or just any animal cruelty. The videos are even more painful. I think it's a shame how some people take...I don't know how to put this...animals' lives for granted? When they're mad or something they'll think...Oh, let's go shoot some deer or something. I'm not much of a hunter, because deer will be endangered soon or later because of the hunting.

I too, have respect for animals' lives, I think animals are important. Because if there were only humans on this earth, I would go mad!!!

Thanks for the awesome essay!! I really enjoyed reading it.

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p.s. my mom used to be a HUGE vegetarian! haha. Oh yeah, she agrees with your essay 100%. :D




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Hah! This is so true! I agree with it completely, being a vegtarian my self :) Ofcourse, I was born a vegetarian so it has beeen easier for me to be one, but now even if you offer me meat or anything I'd say no. It must be very difficult for you to be vegetarian being in Switzerland/The netherlands which are known to meat based economies.So, Brava! Good luck with the resolution!

Yes, it is mean to test products on animals and abuse them, but eating them is a different story. God gave animals to eat. now some animals we cant eat (lev.10) that is why the jewish people do not eat any pig products. killing animals have their right reasons to. I live in PA, so the deer population gets very high. If we do not control that, soon crops will be eatin, and more and more deer die of starvation. dont you think starvation is more painful than getting shot and dieing instantly?(in most cases)


Wel, you must agree that the population of humans elsewhere like in Africa or in some other third world country is more than that of deer living in you area, however do you see humans being killed like that so that they " die instantly instead of starving?" Can you imagine the large scale protests eruptng if such a thing were to be propsed? But people just show plain apathy to animal rights activists. :roll:

What I liked best about your essay was that it makes us think about the human nature of animals ( If you're getting what I mean?)

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Thanks for the comment!

It's awesome that you've been a vegetarian since birth ^^

It's not too difficult to be a vegetarian over here, not now that I've figured out which meat-replacement brands to buy, etc. I'm completely used to it, it's not at all a hassle anymore.

Then again, it's been almost two years, so logcially it's easy by now.

*high five's fellow vegetarian*

XxxDo



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