well, brother, i put off reviewing this for a while because i wasn't sure what i would say.
but i think i got it down to the main points.
this was a fun, energetic piece. i too do not think it is much of a poem at all, but i already told you that in person.
i know that you wrote this aroud the same time that i wrote my anti-fireworks poem (after we saw that one show). and i can't help but wonder, did you steal my idea?
i asked you what rhymed with...i can't remeber what during the fireworks show and you asked me if a was thinking up a poem.
did that get you going? am i an inspiration? haha. i'm kidding.
this is a totally original piece--poem or not--and i can see that a lot of people enjoyed it.
nice work.
-GC10
