An Evening Lullaby

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blacktiger3915
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Thu Jul 03, 2008 5:10 pm
blacktiger3915 says... · Thu Jul 03, 2008 5:10 pm
Wow. Nice. First off, welcome to the young writers society! I'm Brooke. Nice to meet you. (I saw that you were a new member) :D :backtotopic:

This poem was sweet as candy and spoken as soft as the cloud. Very good for one of your first real post. You have talent my friend. I enjoyed it and I hope you write more work like this . Good job and keep up the good work! Peace 8)
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EvieSaxGirl
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Fri Sep 12, 2008 8:28 pm
EvieSaxGirl says... · Fri Sep 12, 2008 8:28 pm
Should be written into a song,

but only if the song can do it justice...which isnt likely considering how good this is.

Its a divine concoction of poem, thought and lullaby.

Evie x
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