An Evening Lullaby

Wow. Nice. First off, welcome to the young writers society! I'm Brooke. Nice to meet you. (I saw that you were a new member)

This poem was sweet as candy and spoken as soft as the cloud. Very good for one of your first real post. You have talent my friend. I enjoyed it and I hope you write more work like this . Good job and keep up the good work! Peace

Should be written into a song,

but only if the song can do it justice...which isnt likely considering how good this is.

Its a divine concoction of poem, thought and lullaby.

Evie x