This was a sweet poem, but I was thrown off alittle because of the rhyme scheme. Like somebody else said before, keep to the rhythm you set at first. I don't know what the last line meant, but it didn't work at all for me. This poem was a good idea, but it needed more time to get it right. Good luck in the future and best wishes! Peace
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