The way it was written made me believe it was real. There's a couple of typos that I can't be bothered finding and you probably don't care about anyway.
Nate wrote:And if YWS ever does become a company, Jack will be the President of European Operations. In fact, I'm just going to call him that anyways.
The one thing I appreciate about your stories is that you when it comes to the dialogue its like...you can take it anywhere. And there's no pause which gives the reader the freedom to just keep reading and not stopping.
It's also interesting that you can remember something like that and then write about it with such detail...I've been keeping a diary since 1998 and I have almost everyday of my life from then to now recorded and still, I could never pull from it and compose a story.
It was very nice, very simple. I liked how hopelessly real it was. I really enjoy your writing, I don't know if I've told you that yet. I enjoy simplicity and good syntax more than endless description.
“road near Lufkin”
I have family in Lufkin.
-Sarah
"And I am a writer
writer of fiction
I am the heart that you call home
And I've written pages upon pages
Trying to rid you from my bones...
Let me go if you don't love me" ~The Decembrists "Engine Driver"
