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Suicide Kills Us All

JFW1415 · 2008-06-11T02:17:46Z

Rated for swears, suicide, and teenage boy's thoughts. :) This is my new story, Suicide Kills Us All . (Which is a working title.) It's kind of strange. Connor kills himself, and it's kind of people's reactions...eh, you need to read it. Like, you *need* to. You *want* to. :) Things to look out for: - Character development! It's the whole point I wrote this, and I *need* to develop different voices. - The therapist part . *Very* bad. (So stick it out - it does get better! In my opinion, at least.) - Title suggestions. - If you needed more hints/more subtle ones. - Anything else! Thanks so much! PM me if you'd ever like a critique in return. :) Oh, and this is 31 words shy of 5k, but I figured it would be all right. Close enough, and such a shame to cut up. :) ~JFW1415 Edit: It was so late when I posted this that I forgot to give credit where credit was due! Sam: For writing 'Parking Lot Sparrows,' which inspired me to write this. Suzanne: For pointing me to Sam's story and telling me that I need to write more like that. :) Cal: For making the Table of Doom (Historic.) I kind of stole the chart, took out many words, added one, and wrote. Then I ditched the words. :) Thanks you guys! You're all freakin' amazing. (As are all those who critique!) (Note to self: check out The Laramie Project.) Currently being edited.

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Sun Jul 20, 2008 5:41 pm

JFW1415 says... · Sun Jul 20, 2008 5:41 pm

*dies*

I just realized I haven't said thank you!!!

So. I am kissing your feet. I am worshiping the ground you walk on. I am... in love with you. All of you.

I owe you guys immensely. Go to Will Critique For Food, and leave me stuff. You better.

If not, I'll probably just lurk around in your portfolio anyways.

I know this needs work, and thanks to you guys, I know what to do! I won't edit this for a while - I don't have the patience right now - but I will. Your critiques will not be in vain.

*Throws flowers* I love you all more than life itself.

~JFW1415

Too often we crave the extraordinary in life, without even learning how to cherish the ordinary first. Friend, I promise you this: if you can learn to take joy in the simple mundane things in life, the extraordinary will take care of itself, it'll be on its way, hurrying towards you. But if you skip the first part, it'll ever evade you.
— Arcticus

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