Lovin you

If only I could find the words to say,
If only I could turn back time,
Sittin here missin you wishin you were mine,
I wanted to tell you…
I never stopped lovin you,
I was always true,
And I wouldn’t know what to do,
If I didn’t have you,
I’ll be waitin at heavens doors,
And I want you to know that,
I’ll always be yours,
So if I should die,
Before sunrise,
Just keep in mind,
That my love has no dyin time,
And if my wish ever comes true,
Just remember and never forget,
I’ll always be lovin you.
:lots_hearts:

i liked it were did you get the idea for it?

I liked this one.I think the words should be like this:dying and loving.Thats just me and the emotion at the end kinda takes away from the poem.

thank you for you're honesty and i got the idea when i broke up with my ex

oh ok lets see what everyone else says.

It had an okay sound and a decent flow, but the langauge you used was very plain.

Cute little poem. Matches your avatar

Your ex? You're too busy punching me to tell me anything anyway.
Usually when I say wishing without a g or something I put a ' instead.

ie wishin', wantin',. yeah but that's pretty much me. I liked it otherwise. very pretty, probably one of the only poems that I like that rhymes. And yes, cute avatar.

This is one of the best I have read so far. You used emotions that everyone can relate to..nice job. This is a true poem and though I am seeing someone at the moment your right love has no dying time which brings me back to my past relationship

i think it was well writin

pretty nice but yeah i think the words are a bit plain....and if YOU broke up with him why will you still love him and wait for him??