Umbrellas and Stars

The whole poem strives on it's supberb imagery. I mean, wow. It's great. As soon as I began reading a picture formed in my head and I knew what you were trying to say.

My favourite line:

There is a rush, seagulls taking flight,
as she twirls, flashing strobe colours across the sea.

Nice!

Good job, Pingu.

Eimear

Gives you a gold star ^ ^
I liked it . Kinda confused what it's about but a very cute poem none the less.
Flowed easily keep up the work Caught my attention and it was well past 4am.
you should check out my work if u get a chance

Hello.

This is a truly spectacular poem. Very short. Short but sweet, and thats how I like it.

I am fed up of looking for short poems, so I am glad I saw this,

the content was marvellous
and the information was not lacking

the imagary was covered, and all poetic devices were used well.


well done

Very cool.

Girls, please don't dig up old topics to post on unless the author has specifically asked you to. More often than not, the author is not looking for feedback on that piece any more.

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