Awww, how cute! I love it when I read cutesy, makes-you-smile poetry! It reminds me of an adorable children's book--have you ever considered writing children's books? I think you'd--no, I know you'd be--very good at it! I found nothing wrong with this at all--not even any nitpicks!
hahahahha, you really had me laughing. a cinch to spell, haha I love it. I think I'm gonna go write a cutesy rhyme-y poem now. Thanks for the inspiration!
Thank you! I had wondered, before posting, whether or not it was 'legal' to repost a piece of writing, extended or not. I hope I have not broken some sort of rule!
Goldie
"I hate the word 'Truce'. It means 'Fun's over'." ~My little sister
I think that was when I began to realize that reputation isn't everything. I should focus less about how others perceive me and more about what makes me happy. Because, in the end, I have to live with myself. — Seraphina