Ode to Jam

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Last edited by Goldenheart on Wed Apr 13, 2011 3:42 pm, edited 1 time in total.
"I hate the word 'Truce'. It means 'Fun's over'." ~My little sister




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loved it, the rhyme scheme is great, subject matter is good, jam is great. W00T!!! GO JAM
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Awww, how cute! I love it when I read cutesy, makes-you-smile poetry! It reminds me of an adorable children's book--have you ever considered writing children's books? I think you'd--no, I know you'd be--very good at it! I found nothing wrong with this at all--not even any nitpicks!




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hahahahha, you really had me laughing. a cinch to spell, haha I love it. I think I'm gonna go write a cutesy rhyme-y poem now. Thanks for the inspiration!

made my day. :]
all the best,
s




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My god! It's genius! It flowed like a dream and the words were well chosen.

I am pleased to say that i have no critisism!

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Those who dance are considered insane by those who cannot hear the music.
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Thank you! I had wondered, before posting, whether or not it was 'legal' to repost a piece of writing, extended or not. I hope I have not broken some sort of rule!

Goldie
"I hate the word 'Truce'. It means 'Fun's over'." ~My little sister



I think that was when I began to realize that reputation isn't everything. I should focus less about how others perceive me and more about what makes me happy. Because, in the end, I have to live with myself.
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