The up
Up and up and up we go,
into the sky where appears a show!
The moon will sparkle and the sun may shine.
The stars can gleam, they're so divine.
Up in the sky, it's sweet and cool,
you'll need a blanket you silly fool!
When the sun rises at the break of dawn,
it's smile will sparkle, on and on.
And in the eve, the moon rises to it's spot,
and dazzles us all in the form of a white dot.
The sky is so old, and with age comes many tales,
and the joy that it gives us never fails.
Questions:
1. Do you think that it was a bit corny?
2. Was a bit too childish?
3. Was it too short?
Please try and answere these questions, thank you!
shanan-cat!
