Mellow.

Let's all be mellow fellows,
Eating marshmellows,
Slurping down Jello,
Drinking Mellow Yellow,
Playing cellos.
Mellow

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Haha,
This poem has no purpose as to be a bigg thing in my poetry ways,
As to say, you can tell me a few things to change,
But just remember,
Its silly.
^.^
I think we need a lot more of that in our lifes.

Why post it if it has no meaning? I think we post things on here to get critques so we can help you become a better author. If you're not even going to spend another glance at this poem, why should we spend a couple of minutes telling you about this poem?

:Sythe:

Playing chellos.

It's cellos. Not chellos.

Even if it didn't have any meaning it was still good. A few of my friends and I made a sort of skit like this and we showed it to our parents. If you think about it... it sort of does have a meaning.

It's telling you to be mellow! Like this smilely:

Anyway... It was cute little poem. ^^

-kittykat

poems like this are good.

i think anything that's written has a purpose for some reason, same goes for this. it is a cute little piece. famous authors write stuff that makes no sense all the time.

it's good how you rhymed everything that still made some kind of sense.

think you could write one about different emotions? that'd be wicked.

-Beki

General rule of thumb: if you instinctively add a note that your poem is mindless and has no purpose, it should be posted in your blog, and no where else.

Pssh. Yeah, you're cool.

[[lame-o-tastic sythe]]
like Beki said,silly poems are written by famous authors all the time,,
[[you're gonna be that famous author]]

haha,
xD
ilyy devonlynne

What I mean't by it was I didn't put it on here for critizing,
But for the reader's enjoyment.