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Ummm...... chatspeak much? I can't understand it. If you posted it in just letters I'll read it and critique this. Other than that I'm sorry to say that this hurts my eyes too much.
Two things: one, this is not poetry; two, this site for literary works, and those use standard English (dictionary English, if you prefer. Not chatspeak, which is also against site rules). My advice? Rewrite this using standard English, then repost. If you have any questions about that, feel free to PM me, and I'll be happy to answer them!
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Medieval Lit! Come here to find out who Chaucer plagiarized and translated - and why and how it worked in the late 1300s.
