1st poem review (I really don't know how to do reviews so..)

“Tell me I’m in Love”

My dreams almost came true
when I first laid my eyes upon you
I hate it when we part
I’d love to hit re-start

please God tell me I’m in love
looking at this angel from above
is this Satan is this hell
because this isn’t going to well

You walk by, looking at me
you glide away carelessly
I stand in a pit of shame
wishing you knew my name

please God tell me I’m in love
looking at this angel from above
is this Satan is this hell
because this isn’t going to well

If only you knew how I feel
I think our love could be real
and I know I could make a deal
it’s your heart that I wish to steal

please God tell me I’m in love
looking at this angel from above
is this Satan is this hell
because this isn’t going to well

please God, oh please God
now I know that this is love
watching this women from above
there’s no Satan there’s no hell
I know that this will end well, oh I know that this will end well

Hello I am SimonCowellLuver just call me SCL. Alright not bad, not bad at all i like it. But I just didn't understand this one stanza here (posted below)

please God tell me I’m in love
looking at this angel from above
is this Satan is this hell
because this isn’t going to well

What is the point of satan i think you wanna re write the line because it makes no sense at all. Well if you have any questions feel free to pm me.

Thanks ^_^

SimonCowellLuver/SCL

yeah SCL I've been thinking about taking that line out and changing it, and thanks for the advice.

Cool. I liked it. This would most likely to fit into a song.