English Skies

Aw, that was sad! And well written, I have to say. But I love British boys and the accent, too, like Casey

He was an exchange student, I reckon?

my silhouette imprinting the earth. Another's silhouette imprints

That's repetitive – see?

My world flips upside down and I spin into a void of darkness

Good ending, but remember the point in the end.

By the way, I think this is my 150th review! I'll get a fourth star! Yay! (Ignore that, please.)

The others here have very good points, listen to them. I'll see you around, then.


Demeter xx

lhighton:

Thank so much for your lengthy review! lol

I will make the corrections as soon as I can!

yeah, I know my stories get cliche at times but I try really hard not to let them enter that "red zone".

Thanks again for the encouraging review!

Demeter:

Thanks so much for your comment!

It means a lot to me when people say they like my work!