Farewell Rhyming Poem for our Leader.. 'Founder Leaves'

First thing.. It’s not really mine. My sister's. She wrote (posted) it in an o-rpg chain (KoCRevolution) to our leader who had left. I just corrected her a bit. I liked it so much...
Second.. I didn't know exactly where this belonged. sry

so I wanted post it here... and see what YWS thinks about it! I hope yall like it... just want to know what you think of it before I post my poems

For TheCelticGenesis...

It is time
And the founder of Revolution is leaving
As for the member
That so hard to be believing

Now here Revolution still is
And as strong as it was it will stand
For we shall not fall when one (leader) chooses to leave
We will help each other and give a helping hand

As founder you have been part of the family
So will you stay as a part
Even though you won't be around that much
A memory of you will remain in Revolution's heart

As unheard and unseen you'll be
There, out in the mist
Forgotten you will never be
For without you Revolution wouldn't exist

New members shall not know you
But your name will be hold high
And so we all wish you luck
Now it's time for a good-bye

*~salutes & waves ~*

l8rs xxx Xia xxx

hey this is good ,tell your sister she should keep writing

Yeah this was pretty good.
(I'm browsing through all your work because I'm bored )