Young Writers Society

This is just an emotional release but I kind of like it, so I thought I would post it, enjoy

I just wish everyone would get out of my fucking face,
the world is nothing but bastards and everyone must die
if you want to say something then say it damn it!
don't sit there and stare at what you think is an ulgy face
come out and say something if you turly care about anything besides yourself
so get out of my way world i'm dong whatever I fucking want
not funny to you is it?
well I don't care if your laughing
because I am
HA HA HA HA

ahhhhh the language of a frustrated 11 year old...now we can just refer to your poem when we felling like saying all that shit without saying it. i probably knew all that language when i was your age too. don't fell singled out. stay cool, don't cuss around parents they get mad at you. watch were you use it it is very important...i don't care, but parents probably will. but good poem it tell the frustration of many people, you just the one who let it out. good job.

Good concept, everyone can completely relate. Just expand on it, make it a little more interesting, because at the moment it's just a rambling pile of swear words. Which can be good, don't get me wrong.

I don't use language like that around anyone. I just use it in my poems and I say it under my breath when i'm alone, i've been in the situation where I cussed in front of an adult who didn't like that kind of stuff, so I stop saying in front of anyone. Just wanted to clarify

me too i never say it infront of anybody except when i am playing Halo 2 at a freinds house and no parents are in a room....whenever i cuss in that situation sometimes people will gasp jokingly " o my god william cussed" due to the fact i rarely every cuss.

Hey this was a pretty good poem.

I just dropped by to say that I started cursing when i was in, like first grade (literally). It's become as hard to shake off as cigarettes. I've never smoked cancer sticks, that was just the only analogy I could think of.

ahhhhh the language of a frustrated 11 year old...now we can just refer to your poem when we felling like saying all that shit without saying it. i probably knew all that language when i was your age too. don't fell singled out. stay cool, don't cuss around parents they get mad at you. watch were you use it it is very important...i don't care, but parents probably will. but good poem it tell the frustration of many people, you just the one who let it out. good job.

So whenever we want to totally wig out on someone, we say "HA HA HA HA?"

Oh yeah. lol

HAHAHAHA

very...erm...enlightening, yes, Sierra.

I really enjoy random emotional rants.

i like it i ecspressed alot of emotion and i can relate just like i sure pritty much every one and i also have poems like that i just never cuss in front of my mom

Not much of a poem, but it's a good rant.