Life in the streets!

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Sai-

THe japanese gang member soon made it home. His father's right hand man, Mr. Haku waited in front of the 3 stories rich family house. Sai's house.

"Cr@p...." Sai moaned.

Mr. Haku only comes to see him when something bad has happened. Sai parked his car in the driveway. Quickly, Sai rushed out of his car and walked to Mr. Haku.

"Sai-sama we have a problem." Mr. Haku informed him.

Sai grunted. He hated when people adressed him like that. It wasn't his fault that his father was the head of the Japanese gang.

"What?" Sai asked.

"Your fathers's been shot." Mr. Haku finished.

Sai's eyes widened." what?"



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Naomi~

Once all the wounds were clean and wrapped Naomi asked, "What's the emergency?"

"The leader of the Japanese got shot." Kaori admitted. The second she heard that a picture of Sai flashed behind her eyes.

"Is it fatal?" Himeko urged.

"They don't know yet." Kaori replied.

"W-when did you find this out?" Naomi sighed, trying to keep her fear on a low.

"Right after Science. The class that you skipped to get shot." Innocence joked and slapped Naomi on the arm, she winced and glared at him.
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Mr. Haku took Sai to the hospital. Where is father was.


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name: Alam grant
Gang: Inc.
Age: 16
Appeance: Light brown hair, Dark sunglasses that he never takes off. Has a thing for Hawwian shirts but no shorts. Normal body weight.
Personality: The new guy on his big brothers Gang, He was brought in agaist his big brothers wish's as fodder. He rose in rank as a enforcer for his skill on making people fear him and his gang. Unlike his gang, he show's respect to people that trust him.
Gang: Deal's with Drugs, Contracts, and protection money. most however deal with volence. Member roster: 40.
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" Why couldn't The leader of the Japanese get shot on Monday?" Adam groan's as he parks the almost ruined car in the hospital parking lot.
" Don't they call Japan gangs the Yazuka?" Max, a fellow enforcer, sigh's and step's out of the car.
" Nah, I think thats only in Japan." Adam then stepped out of the Car as well. " Besides, It's a hard word to prouncounce here in the Good USA."
Max looked at adam's car." Why don't you give me that piece of crap? I will get you a brand new Cadillac just like that one."
Adam then laid on the car." I Love this Car, This was the first car me and my brother drove in."
" And the one your Dad drove in, and your Dad's Dad too?" Max laughed and pulled adam off the Car.
" Whatever, Remember. Where here to protect him...after all, He is head of the big money getter."
Adam and Max walk away from the car and then Adam turn's the alarm on with is keys...the Car suddenly explodes.
" Holy Shi..." Max shout's before getting a glass shard in his leg.
" Max!" Adam groaned and looked at the wreckage." My car!" Adam grabbed max and picked him up." Nice place to get wrecked huh?" Max Chuckles in pain.
" Shut up man."




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" Hey doc...He's going to be okay?"
The docter nodded her head." Your very lucky to have got here only 2 minutes when it happened. it's not digged in too deep and he will only be here for a night or too."
Adam sighed and gave Max the thumb's up sign. Max, in the surgery room as he was being put to sleep, gave the thumb's up sign before he fell asleep under the ansthetic.
" Do you know where a man named Mr. Haku is?" Adam asked the docter as she pulled the curtains in.
" He left a hour ago, he said that the patient is in room 45."
Adam patted the doctor's shoulder and hurried out of the room and down the Hospitals hallway's.
Adam felt the revolver in his belt and knew that he might not need it here...Who would attack at a hospital?
He reached Room 45 and looked in...to find a man putting a pillow over the patients head.
" Shit..." Adam growled and reconized the man. Adam took out the revolver and kicked open the door.
The man then looked up and was about to get out a similar revolver...but he was too slow for Adam aiming his gun at the man's head.
" What are you doing here Frank?" Adam growled in anger.
Frank, A Contracter for the gang, looked embarrarsed and almost shocked.
" I Got a new contract, this is worth thousands! Much more than Protecting this Jap!"
Adam grabbed Frank and took out his revolver and threw it to the ground. Adam putted his revolver on Franks suddenly wet head.
" never betray your client Frank! It will show that your not trusting, And Trust is the most important thing in anything! Now get out right now!"
Adam threw Frank out of the room and putted the revolver in his belt.
" Excuse me..." Adam turned to the pateint who was still asleep.
" Dang, I forgot the guys name."




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Naomi~

Naomi and Himeko quickly changed, despite the minor bullet grazes, and headed out the door. Kaori and Innocence followed behind. They each jumped on their on bike, Himeko riding on the back of Naomi's, and sped towards the hospital.

Once they got there they saw a blown-up Cadillac. A man from the Inc. gang walked out of the building, looking nervous. Naomi sighed and turned her bike off. She ran inside and talked to a nurse.

"Where is Mr.Udohuro?" She asked. The nurse flipped through the papers on her desk and looked up.

"Room Forty-five." The nurse replied.

"Thanks, uh," Naomi turned attention to the name tag, "Miss Rachel." Naomi bowed in common Japanese courtosy and took off down the hall. She knocked lightly on the door and entered, her friends following close behind.
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**Schools over for the day...Sai's dad got shot. The new kid and Naomi's little group are at the hospital...**
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Adam stood by the bed of Mr. Uhorou and then his cell phone rang.
Adam took it out of his backpocket and saw it was a call from his big brother.
" Yeah bro?"
" the details are sketchy on who shot Mr. Uhororu."
" That's the Japanese Head right?"
" No, It's the clown down at the circus who got shot by a little four year old."
" Just being specific."
" But we believe that the head's daughter was invloved in a shooting and is on her way right now."
" You need me to protect her?"
" Not neccescary. She can handle herself...too bad that's not your type of girl."
" I really hate you."
" Whatever, brother love man."
" Yeah, Brother love." Adam groaned and shutted the phone off.
why doe's his brother seem to know everything about him? Adam took such a deep thought that he almost didn't notice the knock on the door.
Adam slowly looked out the window and saw a girl, another girl, and a boy. And they were all carrying guns!
" Oh man." Adam sighed and then saw a bed with a curtain.
He could give a quick shot to all three and leave the area before cop's come.
Adam quickly hopped into the bed and slid the curtain down. He sat in the bed and began to look rested.
The door opened




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Naomi~

Naomi walked into the room the others trailing behind her. Kaori was the at Mr.Udohuro's side in an instant. He sat down in the small chair beside the bed and began talking with the man. Gang leader to gang leader. Naomi sat in a small blue chair in the corner and sighed as she rubbed her injuries. Himeko and Innocence stood, watching the door. Himeko often looked at the other patient that appeared to be asleep in the other bed.
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Sai-

Sai opened the hospital room door #45. In it he saw his father talking with another gang's leader. Naomi was sitting in the corner. When he entered the two men stopped talking.

"Hey dad, I see that you're ok." Sai statted.

His father nodded." Yes, my son. The injury was not very serious...Come have a seat next to me."

Sai nodded. He had to always show his father respect especially when there was company. The japanses boy dragged a chair next to his father's bed. Across from the other gang leader.




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Sai-

His father turned to face him." My son. After you 18th birthday which is in a week I decided that you'll lead the Japanese American Yakuza."

Sai stared at him. His eyes buldging." What? But... I Don't Want To Take Over your stupid gang!" He yelled.

Sai jolted out of his seat. Naomi stared at him." over time you'll learn to love it." Sai's father reasured.

Sai looked away." No."

Then he ran out of the room." Wait!" His father commaned.

It was more like an order more then from someone who loved him. Sai was all alone. Ever since his mother was murdered, his destiny was set in place here. Now he was tired of it. He was going to run away[i][u].



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